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  • a n g e l.

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    I feel as if I have commented on this before... But maybe not.
    This story is really cool, I like it.
    I do think that you should change the pictures of the characters, just so that it is... Undersandable of how they look as people. Does that make sense?
    I did not see any grammar or spelling errors so good job.
    Keep writing(:
    October 8th, 2011 at 06:17pm
  • Sodapop;

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    Here I am comment swapping with you! This story is just AMAZING! I You had me from the start. When I first read the summary I thought that the story was going to be like a copy of I Am Legend and/or Contagion, but this is way different! I LOVE the way the story is told in the mutant's point of view.. In most stories like these the story is told from the normal human's point of view. In this one though, you can actually feel how the mutants feel and understand them more... This is absolutely fantastic and very original. You've got yourself a great story and I am definitely subscribing! Keep updating! :)
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    @Lady Tygra
    serious?!
    awesome,we can add you as another author if you like :)
    September 10th, 2011 at 01:04pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    Haha the first chapter was really descriptve. :3 The lay out says alot, too. :D Scuse my little brain fart. I woke up a few hours ago and my brain is not functioning. :/

    Oh and I'm a bit of a fast reader, so yea, XD By the way would you two like a beta? I can fix all three chapters up for you if you want. :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 06:45pm
  • Dark Heart

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    This seems really good so far I love it
    August 28th, 2011 at 03:48pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    There were some spacing errors towards the end where you place commas.

    Over-all I think this is fairly well-written and entertaining. It's a great way to start a story; with action and all its glory :)

    Good job.
    August 28th, 2011 at 03:28pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    @Sweet reVengeance
    THANKS A BILLION :D XD
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • reasons for insanity

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    This is very interesting so far! You've definitely intrigued me; I want to know what's going on! This is off to a good start, so keep going! :)

    I'll be subscribing as well. Keep up the good work!
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:24pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    @NathanWantsCookie its here :P
    my chapter will be up hopefully tomorrow
    August 25th, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • NathanWantsCookie

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    chapter 2?
    August 19th, 2011 at 04:02pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    @PartyPoisonNeverDied

    thanks
    okay,what do you think should be done instead?
    August 17th, 2011 at 11:17am
  • Mike Donovan

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    Mkay. So.
    I really like this. And I'm gonna subscribe now.
    But.
    The layout, it kind of makes it a little hard to read...
    August 16th, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    @NathanWantsCookie
    i know you did and i shall kill you some day for it :P
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:30pm
  • NathanWantsCookie

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    :O I READ THIS!!!!! :D
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:27pm
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