The Numbers - Comments

I feel as if I have commented on this before... But maybe not.
This story is really cool, I like it.
I do think that you should change the pictures of the characters, just so that it is... Undersandable of how they look as people. Does that make sense?
I did not see any grammar or spelling errors so good job.
Keep writing(:

Here I am comment swapping with you! This story is just AMAZING! I You had me from the start. When I first read the summary I thought that the story was going to be like a copy of I Am Legend and/or Contagion, but this is way different! I LOVE the way the story is told in the mutant's point of view.. In most stories like these the story is told from the normal human's point of view. In this one though, you can actually feel how the mutants feel and understand them more... This is absolutely fantastic and very original. You've got yourself a great story and I am definitely subscribing! Keep updating! :)

@Lady Tygra
serious?!
awesome,we can add you as another author if you like :)

Haha the first chapter was really descriptve. :3 The lay out says alot, too. :D Scuse my little brain fart. I woke up a few hours ago and my brain is not functioning. :/

Oh and I'm a bit of a fast reader, so yea, XD By the way would you two like a beta? I can fix all three chapters up for you if you want. :)

This seems really good so far I love it

There were some spacing errors towards the end where you place commas.

Over-all I think this is fairly well-written and entertaining. It's a great way to start a story; with action and all its glory :)

Good job.

@Sweet reVengeance
THANKS A BILLION :D XD

This is very interesting so far! You've definitely intrigued me; I want to know what's going on! This is off to a good start, so keep going! :)

I'll be subscribing as well. Keep up the good work!

@NathanWantsCookie its here :P
my chapter will be up hopefully tomorrow

chapter 2?

@PartyPoisonNeverDied

thanks
okay,what do you think should be done instead?

Mkay. So.
I really like this. And I'm gonna subscribe now.
But.
The layout, it kind of makes it a little hard to read...

@NathanWantsCookie
i know you did and i shall kill you some day for it :P

:O I READ THIS!!!!! :D