Advanced English Folio Piece - Dramatic Monologue. - Comments

This was really interesting. I liked it. :)

Wow, that was a really interesting read. Much better than the monologue I wrote for English last year XD
I loved how you kept the neuroticism from becoming creepy, but still made sure you could see it was there, if you know what I mean :)

Not bad, first bit seemed to drag, bit the rest of it is quite entertaining, I even felt sorry for him when she wasn't there lol

Maybe I'm just used to a childhood of Woody Allen movies, but I thought he was just humorously neurotic.
I have a half finished monologue that I may actually post after reading this, so thanks for that =)

aha this was pretty interesting, and I agree, I really like the character.
overall, pretty awesome.

Thank you [: Everyone thought the character was creepy but I thought he was nice really. And yeah, once you get the Smiths, you get the Smiths [:

That was actually really humorous, in an almost neurotic way.
I liked the character, I think he could do a lot of equally neurotic bipolar monologues about a lot of things.
Also being a Smiths fan, I couldn't help but smile... You got the whole 'yeah but you don't appreciate Morrissey' thing down.