Was It a Dream? - Comments

@ rhooben
No, I'm not ending the story there. lol I'm so sorry that I haven't updated or even made paltry attempts at updating. It's kind of a terrible excuse, but I have been so very busy with getting ready to graduate university that these stories fell to the backburner. But, I'm going to make it a point to start writting again to keep myself sane in my last semester. Thanks so much for sticking with me through this. =)

Love, Beast

Are you ending the story there ?

Comment swap. :)
I was brought here by comment swap and when I read the description it took me a while to start reading it because I don't usually read ban fan-fics. They can be confusing for me because I'm not a crazy band total fan-girl. (t.v. shows and movies are more my fan-girl expertise.) but I honestly love it :) keep up the good work!

I've always loved traditional My Chemical Romance stories, and this totally fits the criteria. It's totally cliche from the start, but I think that's what I like about it. Did you ever read/post stories on Quizilla? I used to go on there all the time when I was younger, back in its glory days. It really reminds me of the stories I used to read.

Anyway, keep updating! :-) This story is really well-written for a traditional fanfiction, and it would be a shame for something like this to go left unfinished.

I'm subscribing! :-)

For one...I'M IN LOVE WITH MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE!!!! I read the first chapter after reading the interesting intro and what I have to say is..Bravo!!! Comment swap has really dragged me to a story that I will be stuck with to the end. The details and the plots of this story is really amazing and I dear say that you are a talented writer. You definitely have me as a subscriber. Please update more chapters soon, you are really awesome at what you do.

Okay. So. I loved this. My favorite parts have to be the lilac roses. Most when Berlynn got them for the first time in the shop, how bewildered she was about how Jared got the address; then the mentioning of love at first site. Awe factor right there. No need to beg for comments on this story. You are doing a great job and I hope you update soon. <3

so, i wanna start off by saying that i don't really read My Chemical Romance or 30 Seconds To Mars fanfiction, but this seems very very promising. I really like your attention to details and the plot is amazing. Also, I like your character development on your original character!

I LOVE MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE AND 30 SECONDS TO MARS. and I have the same name as Shannon Leto except my name is spelt 'Shannen'.

so I love your story, its amazing and I'm defiantly subscribing to this bitch. I'm only here because of comment swap, but I'm sure I would have found your story sooner or later.

I hope this is long anuff, because I hate having to comment twice. so keep up the good work and update soon.

I got here from the comment swap, and I'm glad I did! I've barely read any My Chemical Romance stories. The age of your main character is perfect, just perfect. The girl is never really that old in fan fiction, or should I say woman. ;D It fits into your story amazingly. I love how she considers them like family. I'm only on the first chapter right now, but I love your writing style. it's really casual, and not many writers have that in them. So good job with that! Your spelling and grammar is perfect, and it's obvious you take time with your writing. I'll definitely keep reading, for sure! Don't give up on this story, it has amazing potential!

from Comment Swap (and i just noticed that you got sent to my story too!)
i really really really like this.
I've never read an MCR/30STM story on here, so i commend you for being somewhat original.
I love your main characterb(whos name i cant spell :P) shes so cool.
Definately subscribing, so keep up the good work! x

I liked how B is 31 as opposed to a girl. In her teens or twenties, I've never read an MCR story where the main character was older. I like how you added Jared into the story and I didnt see grammar or spelling errors which is good. However, the introduction wasn't too good seeing as she introduced herself and it was the same as the summary. Overall, good story and I look forward to seeing how the characters develop. :)

This is different. It's very mature, something tht I haven't encountered yet. It was an interesting read and I loved how you made Jared and B take things slow.

I also love how he actually knew what the flowers meant, I'm a sucker for things like that.

Update soon! Please:]

I can say that MCR stories are fucking hilarious? Idk why, but this is like my third one so far through this comment swap and they are just to die for. Usually I am not fond of the main girl since they tend to be Mary Sueish and/or think everything they do is right and the world revolves around them unless they are intentionally like that. I love Berlynn which is rare for me to say in all honesty. The only thing I would change is the introduction part where she introduces herself, for me it sounds weird. When writers start off as saying "Hi my name is blah blah blah" I usually click that pretty back button since it gives me a heads up that this might be a bad story overall, thankfully I didn't and continued reading. I enjoyed the chapters and the sugar high, man that was just a knee slapper.

Never really read any MCR fanfictions, they aren't my thing, but I did give this a chance.
You write well for the most part, very descriptive and detail oriented. You are talented in this skill and should expand your writing with other genres, I think you'll thrive in other areas.
I didn't catch many grammar errors, or spelling.
However I would change the beginning where she introduces herself by saying Hi. For some reason it feels and sounds awkward. Nonetheless very nicely done.

I'm so over the whole My Chemical Romance hype but at least I had an idea of what the heck was going down :) And adding in Jared Leto was a decent twist. Not a big fan of the music but I love his acting. But your characterization was near exactly how I'd imagine the guys to act on a sugar high ;) They were all so sweet and a tad crazy. I don't know why she'd get so pissed that Gee called Jared though, I'd be excited as hell. But that's just me.

AWESOME i loved how she flipped shit of the roadies damn

This story is perfect!