Oh you made my day! An update! Such a great chapter. She's just that kind of comlicated girl I like haha.. and that many of us probably relate a bit to.
The pub sounded like a really cosy place, and in snowy Lapland... I usually hate winters but after the lack of snow here in Sweden this chrismas I kind of miss it, maybe I need to make another trip to Finland. :)
This is really good and I really like it :) ..But chapters 4 & 5 are the same as chapter 3, I didn't actually read 4 & 5 in detail I just scanned over the beginning and end of them so if they are in fact different and just from another perspective I'm sorry. All the same though a very good story so far, I really like the premise and I can't wait to find out more about the characters and where the story is going to go x
Such a promising start :) I can already feel the tension. And the cabin...wow... I want one damn it :)
Thank you both for this great beginning, can not wait to read more.
OH have you heard the great news! HIM is woking on a forthcoming album, talked to my friend in Helsinki this week and she told me that what Helddone's myspace said was indeed true. Can't wait to go to Helsinki for another HIM concert :D Take care you two!
It's a lovely story you guys have got here. Why there are no other comments is beyond me. Anyway, I really like how you've written this; I haven't read anything like it, which is refreshing. I've subscribed. Keep up the good work. :D
August 19th, 2011 at 10:19am
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