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  • pezzie

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    Awww! This was adorable. I loved it. :D
    April 6th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • lavendersbutterfly

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    Aww...that was so cute and sweet I think I loved the last bit the most...well from the moment Frankie showed up to the end...very good
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:32am
  • I'll_Be_Back

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    I said AWW! I did not throw up! I said AWW! And I am still saying it!
    February 17th, 2008 at 12:27am
  • red11111

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    I really liked this.
    I loved how you fitted an entire story into one chapter.
    I really don't know what to say other than, your an amazing writer!
    June 15th, 2007 at 09:31pm
  • Daylight's Death

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    you are an AMAZING writer, although you probably know that. i love it, it was beautiful and HAPPY. usually in standalones, someone dies, or something bad happens, but this one was good, and original. I LOVE YOU.
    June 15th, 2007 at 06:53am
  • play_shauna_play

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    God, I guess some people have it and other people don't huh ?
    your fucking good at what you do
    and this story was pretty much what i expected after reading your other stuff
    you have talent
    lots of it.
    and im fucking jealous of it
    but like i said it was a really good standalone (You seem to be god at writing those)Unlike so many of the shitty writers here, you manage to make this something different, original .
    im sick of reading the same old shit, but your writing is like a breath of fresh air ( obviusly im not as original as you, and that was the best simile i could think of )
    your characters have depth and reason behind there emotions. I think thats the best thign about your writing.
    xox
    June 4th, 2007 at 04:35pm
  • t'lema

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    That was really cute.

    I don't even like Frikeys, but that was great.
    May 21st, 2007 at 07:19pm
  • Mrs.Brightside

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    Youre right. That did make me aww at the end XD
    Youre such a good writer!!!=D
    May 17th, 2007 at 11:24pm
  • nearly witches;

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    INCREDIBLE
    April 24th, 2007 at 02:38am
  • KilljoyAriel

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    I definitively won't barf!! XD I'll go "aaww" instead... so....

    aaawwww!!!

    I loved it!!! Cry
    April 21st, 2007 at 05:27am
  • Kuraii

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    oh wow
    so cute
    i love frikey's theres no where near enuf of them
    April 20th, 2007 at 11:25pm
  • Dave Strider.

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    That was truly amazing.
    So beautiful. I loved it<3
    :D
    April 9th, 2007 at 03:34am
  • Jimmy Urine.

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! That was seriously cute. And I loved the lyrics at the end. AWW! Lol. Obviously I didn't puke. lol.
    March 21st, 2007 at 10:04pm
  • RENT.

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    i read it GAH! again, beautiful, amazing beyond words. i luff yoo!
    February 28th, 2007 at 09:34am
  • Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet

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    awwwww that was so sweet! Frank rocks. I can't pick a fav bit cause I love it all
    January 7th, 2007 at 11:25pm