Where My Mind Wanders - Comments

This was so cute, Freddie!
I loved all of your descriptions and the way you set up the relationship
Between John and Rowen, and I totally hope I'm spelling that right. Lol.
I'm glad that he kept her entertained, and that she held up to her promise as well!
Kisses are such a nice reward! Lol. :)

I thought you wrote this so interestingly. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but to me it does. It was like you wrote it as if it was all thoughts. At least, that's how I saw it. I really liked that. The story was also sweet and simple and totally cute. Sometimes all you need is one promise to keep you going through. =) Well done!!