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  • DisneylandAcidTrip!

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    my god, this was even better than the first one. there were so many twists and it was just amazing. great job :)
    February 20th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • decendingdrakness

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    great endings! but i have to say i liked the first one better
    October 27th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • Lee Hi;

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    I'm sorry I've been gone so long. I've got a lot of catching up to do.

    So, Brian turning on Vengeance was of course expected but I did not expect Matt to die. I didn't expect that at all. It left me on edge. Were Brian, Johnny, and Jimmy going to live? What was going to happen?

    As for the endings, I liked the first one the best. I loved them both but the second one seemed a bit expected. Since we knew that he escaped from the cops before it was expected that he would do it again. The ending of that one when he said hello to Jimmy and Johnny was a good way to end that though.

    The first ending had a good finality to it. They were both dead and the psychoticness had both died with them. Also, the mystery of what happened to Johnny and Jimmy and the horror that they went through along with the thought if it had sparked anything in them, makes you wonder if it really is over.

    I really enjoyed this story along with the plot. It had so many twists and it definitely went above and beyond the first story which usually doesn't happen with sequels. If you were to ever refurbish this story with more fictional characters I would use the first ending.

    Wait....then again... it is expected for people like that to die in a horror movie so... I guess its purely your choice on which ending you want to keep. (Unless you're going to keep both.) But I guess since that little what if with Jimmy and Johnny is in there it draws me more towards the first one.

    Hope you enjoy writing more amazing stories!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 12:19am
  • SeventhSynOfVengenz

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    Wow, just read the endings and I like em. This is so wickedly good.
    October 21st, 2011 at 06:14pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    you have a twisted mind xD i loved the story
    October 21st, 2011 at 05:03am
  • Doctor Bones

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    weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! they were brilliant endings, I loved it!
    This story was amazing, I'm glad you wrote it :)
    October 20th, 2011 at 09:34pm
  • Doctor Bones

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    Zacky's totally nuts, it's brilliant :D
    October 20th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Zacky's fucking crazy
    October 19th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    what is The Rev going to do I wonder? update soon
    October 19th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • Z.Vengeance

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    So I just read all the updates for this.... and all I have to say is holy shit.
    O_O
    This is amazing and I wasn't expecting Zacky to be the one made up.
    Just... holy shit.
    October 16th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • decendingdrakness

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    O.O.................. WOW!!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • Lee Hi;

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    O.O.....OH MY FREAKING GEEZERS!!!!!!!!!
    Wow that was.....epic... if I do say so myself.

    I was not expecting that at all. Zacky was the personality, dang. I wonder how Brian will feel about Zacky being fake around him since he was created. Poor Brian. :( He was just a normal kid until Vengeance did that too him. He was just at the wrong place at the wrong time. That has got to suck. If that were me I would kill him regardless of Zacky. ;) Or at least get some pretty damn good revenge.
    October 14th, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    wow
    October 14th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • T-nig 666

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    More! More! More!
    October 14th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Ohh shit
    October 14th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • Through-the-Night

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    *Squeals*

    I love you <3

    I want the next part! Please, please, please!
    October 14th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • Scar Vengeance

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    Smut. :)
    Also, what's a nymphomaniac?
    its someone who's addicted to sex. :P
    October 7th, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • Lee Hi;

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    Smut. :)
    Also, what's a nymphomaniac?
    October 7th, 2011 at 12:43pm
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Dam
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:32am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    loved the update
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:25am
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