Raven and Roseanne! - Comments

dreams??? I think sometimes you worry to much... look at what that is doing to me... lol... anyway, the borrowing from others is why I'm noticing the inconsistencies... but for what it is, it's not bad... and yes it's ok to let things wander and go where they will...

thoughts from moi ;)

By the way the story is base off of bites and piece of dreams I been having.

Thanks a lot for that, Hippy. It is a story, beside could have a boyfriend and did not tell anyone. I know from seeing people actions, and also on the net works too.
So gave me some slack...Man.
I also read romace novels once and a while i play off of them too.

Maybe my next story can be tell by a some else view, but now with this one. I have to play along with it.

Beside it is just a story. Live with that.

Love ya! ;P

I love your ideas... you are so full of them... I like that you are courageous to write about things you haven't experienced... your story was written better than the others... my only complaint is that it's full of inconsistencies to what would happen in reality given the experiences of your characters... although, I would wonder if you had ever been beaten, cuz you're awfully correct about that... as for the penis thing, they don't swell with sperm and very rarely drip, ooze a bit, but not drip before sex... ;)
anyway, I would love to see something written by you, that doesn't use you as the main character and is based on stuff I know you know about... like weekends spent at your Uncle's or your trips to BC during vacation... or write about a young woman who lives on her own who wants to get married but can't seem to find a hubby... or the crap at work... just don't use your name or variations of it... I'd like to see your life from a different perspective... you are talented and it's frustrating for me to see you wasting it on stuff that is flawed by your lack of inexperience... you so need a boyfriend ;P lol...
anyway, maybe do something from Izzy's perspective... write about how she might see her day going and coming... how she sees you and interacts with you... surprise me... :)