I wish that I could watch the video that inspired this but thanks to my slow internet, I can't. xD I really love how, with this story, you kind of focused on other members of the band that don't get as much attention. As much as I love Manson, it was a nice touch. This is something I love about all your stories as well; these guys are kind of more of a persona when they're playing in the band but you really make them into ordinary guys.
I know I mentioned that I've never seen the video but I have to ask: whose idea was it to get Manson to play the VMA's? That just sounds like a bad idea (to most people; I think it was brilliant). xD
I adored this. The entire idea was so unique and it was so cute. I loved Marilyn as well, being such an asshole and smug about his thoughts. As soon as I get somewhere with wireless, I'm watching that video because it sounds absolutely brilliant... much like this piece of writing. Great job love; I'm going to keep an eye on your writing, because I really like every piece of yours that I've read. :)
OMFG YES!!!!! :D LOVED it. Oh, my fuck, it was so funny. And it's so totally something Manson would do. And I love Pogo's comment about orgies and smacking Zim on the ass. XD