Me Gusta!!!!! This is getting so much effin' better everytime you update!! I Can't wait for more! Update Soon! Eric Is SUCH a douche...So Is Leslie. I Bet He Wants Inside Her... LMFAO. Love You Darrian!
Fuck you Eric. Go get herpes. I'm excited to see what happens to Jess. I didn't see many errors, so that's good. Just a small tip (not saying you HAVE to, but, you know.); A majority of the writers on here put spaces between their paragraphs, just so it doesn't look like a block. But you don't have to, just saying(: Overall it was good. Leslie and Eric can go fuck themselves (after they fuck each other, of course). Update soon? -Subscribes- <3
Well Eric's a douche bag. xDD But this is a good story. There are a few errors mainly just punctuation and spelling. But other then that I like the flow of the story.