He Loves Me Not - Comments

  • DarrianLovesYou

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    LOLOLOL. Love you Cary.
    October 5th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • You Lint Licker!

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    Me Gusta!!!!! This is getting so much
    effin' better everytime you update!!
    I Can't wait for more! Update Soon!
    Eric Is SUCH a douche...So Is Leslie.
    I Bet He Wants Inside Her...
    LMFAO.
    Love You Darrian!
    October 5th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • DarrianLovesYou

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    Eric is a douchebag.
    But thanks guys.
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • Austin Ashby

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    Fuck you Eric. Go get herpes.
    I'm excited to see what happens to Jess.
    I didn't see many errors, so that's good.
    Just a small tip (not saying you HAVE to, but, you know.); A majority of the writers on here put spaces between their paragraphs, just so it doesn't look like a block. But you don't have to, just saying(:
    Overall it was good.
    Leslie and Eric can go fuck themselves (after they fuck each other, of course).
    Update soon?
    -Subscribes-
    <3
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • You Lint Licker!

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    Well Eric's a douche bag. xDD But this is a good story. There are a few errors mainly just punctuation and spelling. But other then that I like the flow of the story.
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:35am