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  • Thisistheend123

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    Please update this!
    February 25th, 2013 at 12:44pm
  • MaryJane_2013

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    AAHHHH MORE!!!! Please!!!! :)
    April 26th, 2012 at 11:58pm
  • defenestration;;

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    Team Matt allll the wayyy! <3
    She's GOTTA be with him, he loves her!
    come on, come on, TEAM MATT. :D
    I loveeee your writing, and there are already 1,000,000 brian fics, so come on let Shadows win this one. :) yeah i know, there are a lot of matt stories too, but still. (:
    March 24th, 2012 at 09:06am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :)
    March 2nd, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    I feel bad for Brian even though he deserves what he's getting. I just hate seeing him beat himself up. :/ He should listen to Chloe though and apologize even if Olive does hate his guts. It's the least he can do. Update soon please! :)
    February 29th, 2012 at 09:37pm
  • decendingdrakness

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    Great update!!! Cant wait to read more :D
    January 29th, 2012 at 05:51am
  • choirgirlx3

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    UPDATE SOON! Love it :D
    January 28th, 2012 at 08:48pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Brian you didn't win her over now :/
    I can't believe he was that mean to her.
    Great update
    January 27th, 2012 at 01:16am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Brian you asshole! >< That is so not the way to win over a girl. Damn, he pissed me off in this chapter. And now Matt gets to be a cocky bastard because Brian screwed up. Grr. Great update though! :D
    January 26th, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • lucinda4

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    FINALLY BACK yess i love this please update more
    :)
    January 26th, 2012 at 07:22pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awesome story!!!
    I can't wait to find out what'll happen next!
    More soon please!
    January 17th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • shadzandreesh

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    Great story! Love the way you described the boys. :DDD Matt is simply adorable, Zacky too ;]] I hope the things between them will work out, cause I'm totally team Matt, I dont wanna see Brian ruin everything :PpP
    January 3rd, 2012 at 02:07pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I'm glad her dance routine turned out amazing :D
    December 5th, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    Jimmy's always the one who suggests everyone gets drunk. And that's why we all love him. Great update!!
    December 5th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • choirgirlx3

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    loved the update can't wait to see what's going to happen
    December 4th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • lucinda4

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    Yess an update :D love it!
    December 4th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • lucinda4

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    this story is great!!! subbed
    November 21st, 2011 at 05:55pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    AWWWWW!!! Awesome update!!!
    November 20th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Oh Zacky..he cost her the the victory of almost beating Syn on Guitar hero. lol
    Great update
    November 20th, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • hello love.

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    I've only read the first chapter, so I'm only commenting on that, but the way you've opened is bothering me. Writing 'super nervous' is clumsy and thoughtless. In the very heart of the story, Olive's tattoo, there's issues. There would have been a more in-depth conversation, she should have looked through his portfolio (or mentioned she liked his work on a friend or something). Tattoo artists do not let you into shop, sit you down in the chair and start work on you. There was also no mention of hourly rates. You show a lack of research on this topic, a pivotal point for your story.
    Your grammar also needs attention.
    Other than the above I found the first chapter entertaining, but because of the above, I do not intend to continue reading.
    November 20th, 2011 at 08:14pm
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