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  • The_Hanging_Tree

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    As a Catholic turned Atheist, I find so much pleasure and enjoyment out of this... Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece
    July 9th, 2014 at 04:44am
  • Stop Drop And Roll

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    update. NOW.
    January 19th, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • decendingdrakness

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    this is amazing!!!!! cant wait to finish this one and start dark blood
    October 17th, 2011 at 06:04am
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Wow I really liked this
    September 25th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • Lee Hi;

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    wow. nice ending haha
    I see you guys like writing Avenged Sevenfold fanfics? I've read House of Syn and it was really good.
    This story was awesome and I'm so glad you added the Killjoys in there because I'm a huge fan of MCR!!!!!
    I'm sorry it took me so long to find it but i guess i wasn't stalking the right person's profile :D
    going to read the sequel!
    also i'm wondering if Satan had anything to do with Frankie's pregnancy?
    September 20th, 2011 at 02:32am
  • Hollow and Heartless

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    this story is definately fucked up... I LOVE IT
    September 17th, 2011 at 07:47pm
  • Synyster Halo6661

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    TO THE SUBSCRIBERS AND FANS OF DARKNESS WITHIN
    THE SEQUEL IS UP NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE SUBSCRIBE AND COMMENT!!!!!!!
    OR ELSE WE SHALL NOT WRITE!!!
    COMMENTS = CHAPTERS!!!!!!
    September 12th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • fienix66613

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    very very very very very interesting and awesome story i absolutely love it!
    September 12th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • Synyster Halo6661

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    Hey commentors! It's Synyster Halo6661 here!
    I'm more of the interactive writer towards readers, oh and if you have some interesting ideas don't hesitate to send me a message and I'll contact Scar
    Thank you for the positive feedback, we both appreciate it!
    Who was surprised at Frank's confession at the last chapter? Comment and say so if you do
    The sequel will come up soon, but please be patient as Scar and I have duties outside Mibba.... aka my last year of Junior High School aka the 8th Grade
    Check out our other stories as well!
    Oh and spread this story around to get it more popular!
    Who loved the sex scenes? I'm a complete beginner but I think I did good! Comment if you think so!
    Bye Bye!!!
    September 10th, 2011 at 07:28pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    This is really good and I lioved it... I read the whole story and it's amazing and I can't wait for the sequal cuz I wanna know what happens with James and everyone
    September 10th, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    I absolutley LOVE this story :D
    I just read the WHOLE thing, it is so amazing!
    I would love to see a sequal!
    September 10th, 2011 at 03:39pm
  • Doctor Bones

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    ME GUSTA! SEQUEL!
    September 10th, 2011 at 03:18pm
  • ART IS THE WEAPON

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    <3
    September 10th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • Doctor Bones

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    ENTER THE STALLION DUCK! haha that update made me smile :')
    September 3rd, 2011 at 03:57pm
  • Doctor Bones

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    *Le gasp!* who is the mysterious figure that appeared???
    September 2nd, 2011 at 03:20pm
  • Doctor Bones

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    ooooh Me gusta! that was a good scene :)
    September 1st, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • Doctor Bones

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    I like this story, update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! I'm hooked! :D
    August 30th, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • molly_makeout

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    I love it!!!
    Update soon please!! :)
    August 26th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    I like think I liked this version better.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 07:22pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    "You wanted to spend more time with me." - I think that was my favorite line in this.

    Zacky's part got me all teary eyed. I'm wondering besides Zacky's eventual vengeance if you'll give more information on the group that gang banged him.

    Besides that, I think that each of the guys are very interesting and distinct, which I like. In a lot of the stories like this, it seems like they're all doing the same thing, which makes this different. And Jimmy's association with the devil was a nice touch.
    August 20th, 2011 at 04:39pm
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