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  • parkerlover

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    i need an editor....any?
    September 3rd, 2011 at 02:10am
  • Squidz

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    Ay itz a really good story
    August 25th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • parkerlover

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    it can be reported?awww okay thx
    August 19th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • parkerlover

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    i no it has grammar errors and others.i'm going to edit after i'm done writing it.
    August 19th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • Merida

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    The title of your story needs to be capitalized and so do many of the 'i's you have used. There are many grammatical errors and capitalization is very needed. Your story can be reported for all of these things. I suggest you fix everything before posting again so your story isn't reported.
    August 18th, 2011 at 10:07pm
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