Hey I just found this...love it. Can't wait for the next... 
April 15th, 2013 at 04:19am
But If I Share My Secret, You're Gonna Have to Keep It - Comments
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Wow, good story!December 22nd, 2012 at 04:13pm
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Love this story!November 29th, 2012 at 03:07am
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Also the dialogue seems really fast they are really short, I know there are some conversations that are really short but every single one of these are and it just makes it seem weird. The layout also hurts my eyes of how bright it is so maybe changing the color to something more darker or more dull would be great.March 5th, 2012 at 06:30am
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the story is good but it's really really short chapters and every single chapter seems rushed. There's no pace to it or depth to the character and all of the dialogue seems a bit forced, well more like unrealistic. There is also no details, it would be great to add more details of how the person is feeling and everyone else around them or what they are expressing. It would add a bit more flavor to your story and it seems like you skip around a lot one minute Moe would be talking to someone and then the next she is doing something else. There is always room to improve and I do like the story regardless anywaysMarch 5th, 2012 at 06:28am
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I love this story! Plzzz UD soon!!!!!!!!September 14th, 2011 at 12:55am
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Love it!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!September 8th, 2011 at 01:31am
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I love it (: , cant wait for more updatessAugust 23rd, 2011 at 03:57pm
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I'm wondering if u can gift wrap this and send it to me. I love it beyond belife and I don't have enough monet to buy it. (:August 22nd, 2011 at 02:40am
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It's an awesome story so far:)August 20th, 2011 at 04:40am
