When the Sun Comes Up - Comments

This was so great. It was all like super cute and serious with the conversation of me and Gabe and then BAM it was creepy because Ryland asked to see your tits. I loved it.

I like it. I got the email it was updated and squealed. I am excited for the second half. Its so cute Claudia flew out to see Gabe<3

Dude, you thinking Ricky is cute made me laugh so hard because all I could do was think of your little brother. Even though I don't know what he looks like but still. Lol. I love you. So much spanish in this and I am awkwardly like "Uh...what?" lol. This was a short but cute chapter because i dunno...gabe is adorable.

For some weird ass reason my eyes started to water at the very end. It wasn't even sad but like my tv has sad person and it was a slight bit sad and it hit me weird. I like it though and it made me think of Giz and how cute he is that little fur ball. awwww. ok. bye!

Its,always sunny and my cafr plan? Perfect chapter. I loved it.

This is perfect, to be honest. And Gremlins is my all time favorite movie along side of Goonies. ahahah. But aw, Gabe is all adorable. Sorry, I love this. And like, its cute he thinks well, the whole being like ian thing. He like knew right away what Claudia meant and I liked that. Am I making sense? I dunno. But I liked this.

Awwww this is me being all nice and what not. Ahaha. That is great. Hehe. I loved it.

Petey panda! And take this... Is my favorite album

I love Vicky T

This made me smile like a loser. The whole conversation with Gabe was way too adorable. I loved it! I also like how you wanted to be in my room and don't want to say the guys name.

I really liked even though Ian was brought up. I'm heartbroken. Haha. So uh, you and Ryland. Oh lala! Haha. And I do tend to cover my face when I feel bad. You know me so well. And Gizmo!!!!!

I enjoyed this a lot because it began with my favorite CS song. No lie, that is my favorite song by then ever. And me talking to Gabe was really cute. I love this story.

Kaitlin that wasn't smart

Kaitlin that wasn't smart

Let me start with, I love how you mention my favorite movie. The Butterfly Effect is just perfect. I really like this chapter. Might be my favorite. I just really like it. I love how I am in this story and wish I really was like this.

I am actually a little hurt and jealous. My ego just went down a whole lot. Haha. I still really enjoy this lovely story. Do not enjoy Bianca. Lmao. This made me even more eager for an update now. I also would so totally just leave and get a beer if Gabe showed up with a random girl.

gabe is jealous.....lol

poor Gabe

This chapter is awesome. The alex cooking reminds me of the cobra cam thibgy where he tried having a cooking show but therd were advertisements. "An umbrella for your umbrella!" Ahaha. And I want you to try ny pumpkin squares. They are so good. I actually feel bad for Gabe. I like the Ian part because its not like we ended badly and we just grew apart. Nice twist. I like this so much.

This is amazing. I love it. I really love how you have me not interested in him, its great. And Ryland being drunk and talking british, lmao. Your note is awesome. I just love it.