Take the Fight From the Kid - Comments

D: no! you can't stop! I love you and this story too much to let you! I think you are amazing at writing, I really do, please don't give in!

I hope all goes well for you. I thought your writing was nice.

I really hope you update this, I love it so much!

I haven't read all of this yet, but from what I have read so far, I think the plot is moving a bit too fast, maybe let things develop a bit slower? Also, I think it would be better if rather than just stating things, like what people are feeling, you could sort of describe and let the reader work our more for themselves

However, I do like the idea you have going so far, so well done

Thank you for listening to my comment and writing something longer, it made me so happy :D <3 I really loved this chapter, especially the two girls XD <3

Don't get me wrong here, I'm fucking skipping over the moon with happiness that you updated!! But I would have loved a longer chapter <3 please post more soon love. Hope you're well, you said you'd been in hopsital D: <3

cute little chapter. Genuinely got the old spice advert in my head when you typed "sheet of diamonds"....The apartment is now diamonds! Anything is possible when your brother is MikeyWay. I'm on a bed. do do do do do do do do.

Duckie, pleassssssssse write more I love it !!!!

i still read i just dont comment i suck at it XD

Good story so far. But it bothers me is when Frank was raped Gerard didn't walk in to stop him.....

Where did Frankie think they were gunna go?! And dude...You'd think he'd notice a butt plug up his arse XD

Christ I love this story so much. Its complately different to any I've ever read. Would you like to me to put it in my next A/N on my stories? (I dunno when I'll be updating though <3)

I love Zacky xD he's awesome! I hope Frankie's throat gets better!!!!! <3

I loved it! So cute! sorry it took me so long to reply <3

awwww frankie <3 that's so cute! i love the overdramatic sighs XD
update please? :)

hey :D just found this story and i love it already, fantastic start <3 poor frankie :(
can't wait to read more :)

Hells yeah. Taking your comment virginity! I just found this story and it's a really good sstart! It looks like it's gunna be a really interesting concept and I cant wait to see how it pans out :)