I wish you would have made the layout into something different. But this is still good. I love how realistic your story is. How she kept telling herself that she was perfect. How everyone thought she was sick. How she said everyone envied her because she was skinny and thin. How she kept calling herself perfect. I also liked how you discribed everything. Lastly I can say is keep writing, never let anybody ever tell you different. (Sorry I suck at comments and reviews.)
Lastly I can say is keep writing, never let anybody ever tell you different. (Sorry I suck at comments and reviews.)