Red - Comments

WOAH, that escalated quickly.

decided to reread. Not sure if I regret that decision or not.
STILL CREEPY
AWESOME
BUT CREEPY

soooo fucked up, but so well written, and still i enjoyed. aw, i didn't see it coming either! great job <3

Wow. I almost don't know what to say right now.
This was really awesome, but really weird too.
I think my eyes were twitching a bit at the end, even.
I kind of love this story, actually.
But I still don't know what to say about it.
Just that I love how sick and twisted it is...

Holy sugar cookies , that was creepy af . but you know, in a good way. its like, i don't know if i like it or hate it . :O

I have no words for how absolutely amazing I think this is.

And then the silver steak knife that came with my mom's kitchen set, although it'd never been used, flew through the air and pierced through my stomach and the wall.

This was absolutely my favorite line. Dont even ask me why.

And you were thirteen when you wrote this, right? Buddy, I worry about your mind.

I love your style. You have a real talent there. You write really carefully, and make things that should seem more wrong or sick, really beautiful.

i'm a stickler for happy endings:D

i liked it until the end.

I came back to stalk again. I love the layout of this one. It’s simple and still really pretty. The background with the birds looks really cool. I had to wonder what the birds had to do with the entire thing, however. Unless they’re ravens? That would work. I’m too braindead to realize that they’re probably ravens. Okay. So. I was a bit surprised when I read it was incest and even more surprised when it was slash. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there that a quick read-over will fix. However, that certainly didn’t detract from the story, especially the end! I was not expecting that at all in the beginning. It was so surprising. This was really good and even though it was sick, I loved it. <3 Haven

Holy fuck. As sick, odd and twisted this is, you can't help but enjoy it. The last part... wow. But you wrote it very well :3

AMAZING.

This was so fucked up and creepy. It was kind of uncomfortable to read xD but hey, you did a fucking awesome job writing it. You are just so talented :D I love you border collie!!

This.. Was intriguing. Very much so. I, sad to say, was not disturbed by any of it. >_> It was very well written and you could feel Red's emotions, and then Hayden's in the end. He was desperate to undo what he'd just done to his loving brother. Red would of done anything to keep Hayden happy, and you could tell. This was actually.. Very sad. Not sick and twisted. It could very well happen. Hayden doesn't have a choice. He is infatuated with his brother and he can't change that. He probably doesn't even know how wrong it is. Red does, though, so he doesn't say anything about it. I think most incest stories are very sad in a sense, because you can't do anything to help them. It's really no one's fault. It's all up to fate. Hayden also did drugs, which would be a contributing factor. He might of learned it from someone at school. We don't know. I just.. Wow. I really liked this.

You're an incredible writer. <3

This was twisted, but it was amazingly done. You're a great writer. You should write more like this, I'd love it!

Wondeful job <3

I know I probably shouldn't have been smiling, but I was smiling and I don't feel no shame about it. And hell, this bit - Hayden popped eight Adderall and tried but failed to fuck himself with Red's severed member - made me laugh.
I absolutely loved this because come on, you made him cut his brother's dick off! That's just.... no one's done that really, and I loved it.
This was an amazing read.

You are an amazing writer. Your mind is fucked up, and twisted. It's great.

I don't think more can really be said.

I MADE IT. =D
I was... let's say that I probably will never forget this story and leave it at that.

Just. I was. I'm smiling at my idiotacy, (is that a word?) because I can't form words. This was awesome.

You're going on my favorite authors list, and you HAVE to let me know if you write more stories like this.

What I'm feeling is slightly uncomfortable >,> I dunno, but hom. relationships are easier... and better... to read. I feel like a creeper.
XD

I could see this turned into a full-fledged story.

Is it wrong that I was smiling like a fool from when Red was killed to the very end?

Twisted, but that's what makes it so great. And you be an amazing writer helps, too.

Please write more like this.