Wow. I almost don't know what to say right now. This was really awesome, but really weird too. I think my eyes were twitching a bit at the end, even. I kind of love this story, actually. But I still don't know what to say about it. Just that I love how sick and twisted it is...
And then the silver steak knife that came with my mom's kitchen set, although it'd never been used, flew through the air and pierced through my stomach and the wall.
This was absolutely my favorite line. Dont even ask me why.
And you were thirteen when you wrote this, right? Buddy, I worry about your mind.
I came back to stalk again. I love the layout of this one. It’s simple and still really pretty. The background with the birds looks really cool. I had to wonder what the birds had to do with the entire thing, however. Unless they’re ravens? That would work. I’m too braindead to realize that they’re probably ravens. Okay. So. I was a bit surprised when I read it was incest and even more surprised when it was slash. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there that a quick read-over will fix. However, that certainly didn’t detract from the story, especially the end! I was not expecting that at all in the beginning. It was so surprising. This was really good and even though it was sick, I loved it. <3 Haven
This was so fucked up and creepy. It was kind of uncomfortable to read xD but hey, you did a fucking awesome job writing it. You are just so talented :D I love you border collie!!
This.. Was intriguing. Very much so. I, sad to say, was not disturbed by any of it. >_> It was very well written and you could feel Red's emotions, and then Hayden's in the end. He was desperate to undo what he'd just done to his loving brother. Red would of done anything to keep Hayden happy, and you could tell. This was actually.. Very sad. Not sick and twisted. It could very well happen. Hayden doesn't have a choice. He is infatuated with his brother and he can't change that. He probably doesn't even know how wrong it is. Red does, though, so he doesn't say anything about it. I think most incest stories are very sad in a sense, because you can't do anything to help them. It's really no one's fault. It's all up to fate. Hayden also did drugs, which would be a contributing factor. He might of learned it from someone at school. We don't know. I just.. Wow. I really liked this.
I know I probably shouldn't have been smiling, but I was smiling and I don't feel no shame about it. And hell, this bit - Hayden popped eight Adderall and tried but failed to fuck himself with Red's severed member - made me laugh. I absolutely loved this because come on, you made him cut his brother's dick off! That's just.... no one's done that really, and I loved it. This was an amazing read.