Nightmare City - Comments

You litery just blew my mind when I search for a story this is exactly what I want the love story between the main characters kept u wanting more and them just to flippen kiss Dang it. Not only that Ur writing is soooo flippen good that it draws you in every fight seen you feel the fear for the characters and it has you on edge till they are okay you feel rag emotion as if you were there living it. Every character was so well written out that I loved and understood them all. You need to publish this bestseller right here I don't care what you write next becuase ill read it but please can it atleast give a happy ending to these two love birds first

Heya! As ever, LURRRRVVEEE your story so, so much! Whether I read it here or in Gaia, it's still good! XD

Still, will you continue? I totally love your stories~ <3

OH MY GOD. THEY DIDN'T KISS. I'M SO MAD RIGHT NOW. ; A ;

WOW!! That was a great three books and I really enjoyed reading them all. I hope that you keep writing new stories and even keep up this stories.

I like the first half, about focusing on Angie's father and all that.

As for first person, I can understand it being restrictive. Though, I did enjoy that POV. Whatever makes you comfortable though, it's your creation. :]

I'm closing off this trilogy as "Katrina's Story". That's over and done with. The next book will start a whole new plot, dealing with Hunters and Angie's father. As the books progress more and more characters are being introduced and I'm finding First Person POV to be too restricting. I want to flesh out my other characters a bit and switching back and forth between five or six characters in first person is just going to be really confusing.

For the next book I want to move to a tight third person POV. I can give an example of how it would look, but I am definitely interested in hearing some opinions.

YES. Another book would be amazing! I don't mind waiting a while! ^-^

ANOTHER BOOK PLEASEEE<3

i don't like the sound of that last sentence...
hmm...

VS4 won't be for a while? D:

Aww, they basically admitted how they feel - even though they're both too stubborn to really accept it. :P

*jumps in the air* HE'S SOMEWHAT ALLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVEEEEEE

and now im relived :D sheeeesh you had me worried there ._. lol

NOOOOOOOO!!! WHY MUST YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER?! AHHH D:

._. you killed gabriel? YOU KILLED GABRIEL? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Hey there just wanna say i love yah xD hah im telling yah now when (if) this story comes to end i shall cry because im so in love with it :P never stop writting! Your talent is to good to go to waste :D!

you know, i'm really get a little lost from time to time. didn't they, i don't know, stop trying to kill each other when iGabriel asked her to lock him up? it's just really weird how she just decided to stop being Katrina Riley. How bout move to another continent, hmm? =p

are you freakin' kidding me > _ > another cliffhanger? really? oh well =p i'm happy as a clam anyways, especially with all of the character development! very good!

Aw dont worry im sure it just becuase you have many silent readers :) i honestly cant wait to see what happens next! :D

The last comment before yours was in October, I honestly thought that maybe you guys weren't interested any more. -_-

Worry not, for I will upload more chapters, I just wanna know what you guys think too.

Ahhh i love all your series and have been waiting so long for an update! I worship your writting <3