Oh apparently this story was 'inactive' in my subs because Mibba freaking hates me. Anywho, I think it's adorable how worked up Zayn is for her birthday. The lemonade bit was hilarious and that tiny bit of Niam killed me. I can't wait to see what Harry's giving Avery~
I really don't blame Zayn for the way that he feels...having a best friend for a guy can be very tricky because you always think that they have different intentions(which Harry does and Zayn knows) but yeah. I feel bad for Zayn even though he asked her out because Harry couldn't muster up the courage to do it himself which still irks me. I don't know who I want Avery with...I mean her and Harry are perfect but then there's Zayn as well. Hmm....I think this may be my favorite chapter so far. Good job :D
It did reach my expectations! Very cute :) as always. I just love how effortless they are. They don't have to put on some kind of act they can just be themselves around eachother :D I also love Avery's bubbly personality. She's always so happy.
So I found this story and I've subscribed to it but I haven't actually commented yet (oops!) I think this is good. It's sweet and innocent but I can tell something big and dramatic will happen o.O Tbh though, Zayn kinda deserves it after taking away Harry's girl
Oh my gosh I absolutely love this! I find it really hard to find anything that isn't Larry Stylenson (which I love but sometimes they just have too much ;p) and I was scrolling through new stories and flipped out<3 But still, I really like this story<3 First chapter I did get a little scared Zayn was going to be a bad guy haha, I am going to continue reading it now! xx