June 19th, 2012 at 12:04am
The layout is very simple, but gorgeous at the same time. The banner is also beautiful.
You write very well. Your chapters are a nice length, which gives the audience a good amount of information. Your descriptions allow vivid illustrations to be painted in your reader's mind. Over all this story has a creative plot which strays from the cliche. I enjoy that it isn't all happiness, and that you incorporate realistic details such as when Cali said goodbye it was somewhat awkward between her and Steve.
Over all I really enjoyed reading this, and I am glad that there are authors like you still around. Beautifully done.
You write very well. Your chapters are a nice length, which gives the audience a good amount of information. Your descriptions allow vivid illustrations to be painted in your reader's mind. Over all this story has a creative plot which strays from the cliche. I enjoy that it isn't all happiness, and that you incorporate realistic details such as when Cali said goodbye it was somewhat awkward between her and Steve.
Over all I really enjoyed reading this, and I am glad that there are authors like you still around. Beautifully done.