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  • bless

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    The layout is very simple, but gorgeous at the same time. The banner is also beautiful.
    You write very well. Your chapters are a nice length, which gives the audience a good amount of information. Your descriptions allow vivid illustrations to be painted in your reader's mind. Over all this story has a creative plot which strays from the cliche. I enjoy that it isn't all happiness, and that you incorporate realistic details such as when Cali said goodbye it was somewhat awkward between her and Steve.
    Over all I really enjoyed reading this, and I am glad that there are authors like you still around. Beautifully done.
    June 19th, 2012 at 12:04am
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    The layout is very simple, but gorgeous at the same time. The banner is also beautiful.
    You write very well. Your chapters are a nice length, which gives the audience a good amount of information. Your descriptions allow vivid illustrations to be painted in your reader's mind. Over all this story has a creative plot which strays from the cliche. I enjoy that it isn't all happiness, and that you incorporate realistic details such as when Cali said goodbye it was somewhat awkward between her and Steve.
    Over all I really enjoyed reading this, and I am glad that there are authors like you still around. Beautifully done.
    June 19th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • Smartie147

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    This almost made me cry.
    March 30th, 2012 at 06:11am
  • OHAIzeldacakes

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    meep. I peed. this is great. I like how you write, how you sort of send it back into the past. Gives sort of a story line to work with.
    CONTINUEEEEEE. PLEASEEEEE:D
    February 13th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • burple17

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    I love it! I just found it and read all you have so far. :)
    December 23rd, 2011 at 08:26am
  • Hanna

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    <3
    December 14th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • Smartie147

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    Des. I am pumped for this to get going. And I mean going.
    November 29th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • Rrrr

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    Lovely ;) Hope I didn't get you too excited that you had a new comment lol
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:17pm
  • Smartie147

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    where is this going?! WHY AM I THE ONLY ONE COMMENTING
    October 9th, 2011 at 12:30am
  • Smartie147

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    UGH THIS IS SO PAINFUL DES UGH
    September 29th, 2011 at 05:55am
  • Smartie147

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    Fuck I love you des. LIKE ACTUALLY SO MUCH.
    aSLDkjfskldjfjasdjf
    September 28th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • witch.

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    WHA!?
    I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU SPEAK OF. WHAT AM I DOING TO YOU.
    September 5th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • Smartie147

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    DES DON'T DO THIS TO ME I CAN'T HANDLE IT I'LL COLLAPSE.
    September 5th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • thismessofadreamer

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    Ahkjsjdjls; this is really good so far (:
    I can't wait to read more!
    September 1st, 2011 at 05:16am
  • overlooked

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    aw this is really nice c:
    August 22nd, 2011 at 12:00am
  • witch.

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    Thank you so much! I will!
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • bffead22

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    It's really cute so far, update soon!! (:
    August 21st, 2011 at 03:42pm
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