The Misadventures of Padfoot and Prongs - Comments

  • Dulcis Somnium

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    Ok, comment it is because your hard work definitely paid off. I love the way the characters are portrayed. They're all pretty believable and the pageant is a wonderful and comic idea. So, great job ^_^
    August 25th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • Dulcis Somnium

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    Great story, update soon please. ^_^
    August 21st, 2011 at 09:13am
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    The detail of the story is great. There's nothing superfluous like some stories on here that rely on layouts more than content; everything has a purpose- to tell a story. You've also hit the personalities of James and Sirius quite well, and the two writing styles flowed seamlessly into each other. Very well done!
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:41am
  • Deek8400

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    This is good:) I like it! Keep going:D
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:13am