Ok, comment it is because your hard work definitely paid off. I love the way the characters are portrayed. They're all pretty believable and the pageant is a wonderful and comic idea. So, great job ^_^
The detail of the story is great. There's nothing superfluous like some stories on here that rely on layouts more than content; everything has a purpose- to tell a story. You've also hit the personalities of James and Sirius quite well, and the two writing styles flowed seamlessly into each other. Very well done!