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  • thescenekid

    thescenekid (100)

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    I am seriously waiting for the sequel of this. I think Dallas deserves a happy ending.
    November 13th, 2011 at 08:48am
  • liar's lane.

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    First off, I think it's adorable how 'Dallas' and 'Austin' are best friends; that's perfect.

    Second, I am beyond glad that this didn't have a happy ending. I think that wouldn't have tied in the text as well at all. The way you ended this story and showed their relationship in the past and present was very realistic because in reality, teenagers DON'T have it figured out and I definitely think you showed that.

    Great job! :D
    September 18th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • erika_xtc

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    I'd definitely love to read a sequal to this :)
    September 18th, 2011 at 05:41am
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