Soulless - Comments

Love it

Aww, thank you very much and sorry for a delay when replying to this comment.
Since I don't get notifications for these it's quite easy to forget to check back.
Perhaps, in the future replies could be issued via profile comments or inbox messages ?
If not I understand, everyone has their own way of doing things.

I read through them all again and I am still very impressed.
You seemed to have made necessary improvement or at least I'm having an easier time getting a sense of the situation now. That's good to know, I just would never want to come off as ill - willed or anything of that sort.

I cannot wait for your next update! :D

Wow, still impressing me each time I update:) I can honestly say you are my favorite reader. Not only because you comment, but you let me know where my story is weak. I took your criticism into consideration, and revised bits and pieces of the story. Not a major change, but I would appreciate it if you could read it now and tell me if it has any improvement. Thank you for staying loyal to the story, and letting me know your real thoughts. You could never sound cruel:)

The story is a slow starter, but trust me when I say there will be twists and turns you won't see coming!<3

I very much enjoyed this new update, although for some reason I didn't feel that the story held enough description of the setting and also some of the word choice seemed to disrupt the flow a bit but all in all I applaud you for writing this impressive piece. I hope I didn't sound to cruel , I really was trying my best at constructive criticism :)

I anticipate yet another chapter and really do hope despite her withdrawn nature that she finds solace with someone within the castle. I'm not sure I could bare the thought of her so alone throughout this entire story.

Happy Writing :D

Well thank you very much:))) I hope you continue to read, and get lost into this story.

Fantastic story! Continue soon (:

The Silver Snitch- Appreciation for you right now:) Thanks for staying true to your word, and keeping me udpated. &I seem to struggle a bit trying to write because I know where I am going with the plot line, but finding the appropriate timeline for everything is tricky! Yeah, I really want to dig deep into the main character, so hopefully you can really get to understand her as the story develops. XOXO

Lovecrush1 - I hope you continue to read the updates, and let me know what you think about it:)))!

Thanks for telling me what you think, and that your excited about the next update! That makes me smile:) XOXO

Quite an intrigueing twist of a story line, I cannot wait to have more of her character revealed.
Keep up the good work and I hope to read another update soon.
:D

Have a lovely day!

Oh not a problem : )
Just about to read your newest update now so be ready for another comment.

So far I like this story. I can't wait to see how it develops.

O.o I love this! Please update soon! :D
Lots of Love<3

I didn't even realize that...thank you for pointing that out! I want this story to be the best it can be:) Thanks for keeping me updated! XOXO

Sorry for the delayed comment on this update.
The only thing I noticed that may have just been bad reading on my part is that in the beginning you said that she was in England, but Hogwarts is in Scotland so yeah..
Other than that I'm looking forward to reading more of this story !
I feel like it has much potential.

Have a magical day : )

Thank you so much! I would love to read some of your work. You SHOULD post your story. There will be people on here that would truly appreciate your work.

There really isn't much to go off for me to give you like plot line feedback, but your writing seems good and it is continually holding my interest. I am definitely anticipating the events to come, so I shall anxiously await your next update. Reading a story starting off really makes me wish I could just get over myself and post mine.

Hope you have a wonderful day! :)

Thank you so much. I would love some feedback from you:) I really want to know what my readers think.

Such an interesting start to what I am sure will be a most thrilling story.
I'll subscribe and await future updates.

Have a wonderful day : )