Vice Versa - Comments

First off, I thought the title was incredibly fitting for the concept of the story, and I thought it was a nice touch. Though I do enjoy the premise of body-swapping, particularly in comedy films, but I have to admit that this is not the first fic in this fandom that I've stumbled across through comment swap, so I've gotta say I was a little iffy reading this.

I did enjoy the inner monologue in the first chapter, and I thought that the way the main character was freaking out was very fitting and realistic. That being said, I did feel like the realization that she was in his body was a little too rushed, and I also thought that the overused trope of "bedmate reveal" was a bit cliché, and I would've enjoyed it more if you would've came up with a more unique way of revealing the body-swap.

Once again, I am completely lost when it comes to all these characters that are being thrown at me because I'm not familiar with the fandom, so it was hard for me to become immersed in the story. Also, the flow was a bit choppy in places, so some variation in sentence structure would certainly help with that.

Just starting Ch. 16. I almost didn't read this story because it just seemed strange, but thought I'd give it a shot...I have to say that this is great so far! I love how you've still got Jimmy in there as a cat, I could totally see that!

I can't believe this story is finished, it was really good :)

loved this story it was so sweet and very interesting!! :D

Though i do agre with a sequel

Its kinda like a peaceful goodbye....
Loved reading this hun

Nooooo!! I don't want it to be over =( Sequel!?!?! =D

So one more chapter before this story is over.
I was hoping that Alice and Brian would become a couple but I guess Brian is going to stay with Michelle since he still loves her and she has been there for him.
Now Michelle knows the whole truth about why Brian has been acting so weird lately.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I didn't think she'd believe him

Aw sad it has to end but ive enjoyed every chapter :)

You know the feeling you get when you meet someone attractive, and they ask you to hang out again?

Well, that's how this story makes me feel, after every update, I'm just like ASDFGHJKL

Anyways, <3 update soon please!

I dont want this story end, it was so interesting and funny :) but I can't wait to read the concluding chapter. Amazing job on this story!

Aww Jimmy' s gone :( but at least they're back in their own bodies.

Awh Jimmy's gone :(
All I can think about now is... what the hell is gonna happen next :O

At least they are back in there own body now :)
but aww Jimmy :(

Jimmy's gone again? :(

Yay there back to normal....hope brian doesn't forget about Michelle

I felt sad when I read that Jimmy left and had fulfilled his purpose.
I thought he would have stayed there and lived his life out as a talking cat but he was only there for one purpose and did fulfill the purpose.
I bet Michelle was left waiting in the room naked as Brian told her to be when he comes back.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wouldn't be surprise if they started to feel something for each other.
Because they are realizing things about themselves through each other.
And Brian being all angsty when he saw Alice sleeping beside Michelle in his body.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I happened to read all of the chapters, and let me tell you i loved it. I was a bit obsessed if you must know, so it looks like you got yourself a subscriber!! ^___^

There gonna be back to normal when they wake up aren't they