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  • PurpleLighter1

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    Short & sweet
    January 28th, 2012 at 09:37am
  • ocarina.

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    Oh my good God, I just, I can't! I really can't! This is too freaking adorable, I seriously cannot get over how freaking cute this entire thing is it's just soighoirhglkefngojsfhg.
    I like how he's so interested in all things Discovery Channel, or well just animals in general, as I'm guessing with the Afrian Elephant and lions and owls. I think its cool how he has such a thirst of knowledge, and that's actually really interesting about the lions. Horney bastards. .___.

    The relationship with his mom is really cute too. So many people just forget entirely about parents in stories and seeing them together and the way that they mesh so well is really endearing. It's nice that she's so accepting of her son and his slightly estranged ways.

    I also love how childish he is but it sort of compliments his intelligence too in the way that he's so curious and whatnot. I also love how the vocabulary stays the same throughout, even in the narration, which a lot of people don't do. How he says that I got my tush there and whatnot. And even though you don't spend too much time with details, it's short and sweet and sort of refreshing. Usually getting right to the point would bother me but it's not too skimpy, just short and sweet.

    The summary made me laugh too. Oh, god, this kid. I seriously, seriously can't. It's much too cute. This is my new favorite story, hands down, and it's only two chapters! Gah, I really do sort of get that Forrest Gump vibe like the above comment said, because he's got that childlish quality that just makes him so damn lovable! I will stop wasting your time with my long rambly comments, but seriously, I have fallen in love with this story.

    :3
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:22am
  • ilovecasper

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    Forest Gump. This totally reminds me of Forest Gump. c:
    September 7th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • a n g e l.

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    Okay, I didn't say this before, but I absolutely adore the layout. I also like the summary, on a strange level. Can't wait for the next update!
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • Sing It Out Loud

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    Ah an African Elephant. :3
    And I would love to know more about this new James character... (^_^) heh
    August 25th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • HayliexMon

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    Haha fack. Loving this story so far :)
    August 24th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • a n g e l.

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    This is really cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 24th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • Sing It Out Loud

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    Awesome...can't wait for the next update. And owls are lovely animals. [;
    August 23rd, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    Aw Caleb sounds adorable <3
    August 23rd, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • Synyster Halo6661

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    I think it's epic
    I did the same thing but with penguins.....
    August 23rd, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Artemis Love

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    Aww, short and adorable.
    I liked it.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 05:35am
  • HayliexMon

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    I wanna see what happens :)
    August 23rd, 2011 at 03:50am
  • polka dot perfection

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    i'll give ti a try:D
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:24am
  • MorganRiot

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    That was very interesting putting the fun fact at the beginning. I have a good feeling I am going to like this story
    August 23rd, 2011 at 12:28am
  • sahaaa

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    Short but sweet, and really cute. I actually was like 'awwww' at one point, not gonna lie.
    In short: me gusta.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 12:10am