ch. 13- well Harry's certainly a jerk. Git. Jeez. Snape's her dad? That would certainly be interesting, although he's his usual mean self to her in classes.
I feel so bad for Emily, but I’m glad she at least has an escape Hogwarts. I like how Hogwarts is her very own safe haven and it gives her a place to get away. I would have liked to see more description in the story though. Sometimes there is a good bit of description, but then it just goes into dialogue, and I would like to see them both intertwine to make the story flow more regularly. Overall, I think this is a great story though. It is very interesting and I think Emily is a character that a lot of people could relate to.