Miles Away - Comments

I'm honestly surprised you took this story in a whole other direction. So is Ava out of the picture completely? I think the best thing would be for Raina to try to work things out with Danny. Obviously she misunderstood the situation, maybe she'll feel differently now that she knows danny wasn't cheating.

I would bring Ava back into the picture a little bit down the line with a little "surprise" for Mike!

I think that Raina should stay with Danny and her family and Mike should go to LA and find himself a nice single girl there.
Just my thoughts tho... haha
Im excited to see where your going to take the story!!

I'm speechless! I can't believe Raina gave in. But Mike is pretty hard to resist....you've just rocked my world. And I freaking loved it!

I am soooooooo conflicted.......

I like Raina and Danny together after reading their story, I dont want Mike to ruin them! Plus I hope Mike does not turn into a homewrecker!

I love Jeff and Mike's bromance. I miss it so much. I feel bad for Mike, first he has feelings for miss Raina, who's married to a former teammate and has children with him. And then Danny drops a huge bomb. I can't believe he knew about the trade! Scum bag! Can't wait to see how this effects Mike's loyalty to Danny. I think he might use this as an excuse to make another move on Rainny. Awesome job, Jayla.

Ugh I'm really hating raina right now LOL I will seriously die if she even sleeps with Mike her and Danny need to get through this

Please don't let this break up Danny and Raina! I love them too much

This is getting better and better!!

You know I love you, girly <3

It's been a while, so I nearly peed my pants when I saw you updated! I can't believe Ava just dumped him out of nowhere! I like Ava, so I hope she makes it up to him. And RAINA!!! This has been boiling since A Second Chance at Love. Mike was always there for Raina and I think he always had a little crush on her, this was bound to happen. I love Cartsy being the voice of reason and he's so right. Raina's married and she'll probably always go back to Danny. Can't wait for the next, babe!

Forgive me for being MIA the past like month and a half! But anyway I updated my own story and realized I need to check out yours! Although as you know I am not much of a Flyers fan I can't help be attracted to the lovely man that is Mike Richards! It is really good though I am excited and worried to see how things will go when he had to leave for LA. But I can't wait!
Amanda

love it!

Oh. Em. Gee. I am such a bad commenter. I read this update and I didn't have time to comment right away, so I figured I'd do it later. And I completely forgot. I'm so sorry, girly! Annnyway, Mike totally likes Ava! He blew off Maria, he told his family about her and her kids, which says a lot about his feelings for her. And I loved the protective dad speech "I hope you are using protection son" I laughed big time. Keep up the good work, love!

Ooooh that Mike. I have a feeling Ava might not like that he's gonna get her plane tickets, considering his money spending made her uncomfortable. Perhaps some drama is in the works? Great update, Jayla. I was starting to go bonkers waiting for it!

I really like this story. Cute :)

Ooooooh sexy times! I also liked that Ava stood up to him and let him know that it makes her uncomfortable that he spends money on her. Can't wait for more, I love how this is turning out.

I just finished what you have written so far and I love it! I cant wait for more! haha

I thought this was gonna be new characters, but I'm glad it's the same people! I just love them so much. You just can't let me go :P And my favorite part? “Hey baby I missed you. I was a good boy, what do I get?” I could think of quite a few things he would get....but I digress. Great update, I can't wait for some serious Mike/Ava action.

Great update! I haven't ready your Jeff Carter one though so him being married surprised me! You have 3 characters named Mike, I will have to pay attention as to who is who! Keep it up :D