Ooh, this is an awesome story. And I can’t wait to read the next chapter, either; it sounds great, as well as highly well-written, too.
Also, I can imagine how Charlotte’s first day of being back to school for the first time might go; basically, Charlotte walks confidently down the hall while her tormentors stare in shock after her and are unable to think of anything to say to her; she simply tosses a cool smile back at them as her way of asking “How do you like me now?” — and they wouldn’t have an answer for that because, ironically, she’d make them feel almost the same way they made her feel before she’d been transformed with Dana’s help into the beautiful supermodel that she is now.
Anyway, keep up your superneat, exceptionally creative and beautifully phenomenal writing.
Also, I can imagine how Charlotte’s first day of being back to school for the first time might go; basically, Charlotte walks confidently down the hall while her tormentors stare in shock after her and are unable to think of anything to say to her; she simply tosses a cool smile back at them as her way of asking “How do you like me now?” — and they wouldn’t have an answer for that because, ironically, she’d make them feel almost the same way they made her feel before she’d been transformed with Dana’s help into the beautiful supermodel that she is now.
Anyway, keep up your superneat, exceptionally creative and beautifully phenomenal writing.