Oh my lordy! I am overjoyed that you posted another chapter to this wonderful story. I also like the edits made to the previous chapters, because they still had the flow that your writing seems to be always blessed with. I've made it quite clear that I still want to read this before and I guess this statement reiterates that point.
I also agree with xDorksXareXcoolx 's comment, but I'm sure you will keep the necessary facts included without us pestering you.
Have a wonderful day and I hope to chat with you soon : )
i really like how you are showing different sides of him and stuff... :] love were this is going... and stuffers i was really happy too see another update ^.^
This is really good. It's the origin story! My only comment is don't forget the things Dumbledore and Harry went over when discussing Voldemort in the sixth book, just manipulate it a bit to include his love for Lucette. How he so desperately wanted a position at Hogwarts, blah-blah-blah.
Well even though you may have thought this update to be crap I rather enjoyed it. I could picture it quite clearly and I like the romance that vined its way into your writing.
I just finished reading the prequel, and even though I loved hearing about their Hogwarts romance, I am inexplicably excited for their post-Hogwarts life as power couple. Also, I'm a creeper and love your About Me. It's beautiful - an appropriate FYI of sorts. (: