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  • Zackys_Fallen_Angel

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    More?
    June 25th, 2014 at 06:42pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon please and thank you
    February 6th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • Thorn-the-rose

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    i just read all of your updates so far xD amazing, hurry up and write more please
    January 9th, 2012 at 10:23am
  • MissCassy

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    Quick, quick...update!!!! :DDDD
    December 5th, 2011 at 07:51am
  • TwistedByTheStars

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    I'm hooked! Can't wait for more chapters!
    November 27th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • helena_88

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    aawe yay JIMMY!!!! lovin' him atm :D
    November 27th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • shortygirl

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    Jimmy to the rescue....I wonder what Shadows is gonna say when he finds out Jimmy took her out
    November 27th, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • laughingkid

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    I think that Jimmy would be way better for her than Matt
    November 27th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • Star Angel

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    Update sooooonnnnn so freaking good love it
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • shortygirl

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    What's in the room...they sound creepy....god i hope Jimmy comes save her
    November 25th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • helena_88

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    omg shadows wth have you locked in that room??? :O whatever those things are, they seem pretty non-friendly.. i would not want to be locked in there........... she should have told him that she had been talking a little bit with jimmy... pssh aaanyway.. i loveee this <3
    November 25th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • Star Angel

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    Love this please update soon
    November 25th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • shortygirl

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    Syn just mad that she kneed him in the gut
    November 24th, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • helena_88

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    aah why haven't i found this story sooner?? :O
    really glad that you got me to read it :D if this is the story you meant?? :)
    love the whole hell on earth thing with a7x being vampires and all that jazz :P
    aawe the fact that jimmy is feeling feelings, and that he was kinda hurt when she snapped at him kinda had me teary, i'm a sucker for jimmy being a cutie <3
    gates.. whatta hell is that game he's talking about?? love him as a bad-guy and shadows.. the dark one... hot!! :D *even if he did rape her and that shit*
    November 24th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • shortygirl

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    If you need any help with ideas messege me....and ah shit Matt was behind that door
    November 24th, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • lettettdid

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    jimmy just cant be bad so i like the way you have it written and i cant wait to read me it is amazing and love it update soon
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • shortygirl

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    I can't imagine Jimmy bad either....
    November 23rd, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    This is effing amazing. The chapters are short, and in most cases, i wouldn't like that, but, for some reason, it just works soooo well with this story. It sort of builds up the suspense, quicker. I dunno. But, it is GREAT! :) write more :P
    November 23rd, 2011 at 03:03pm
  • xXcaslynXx

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    Love your story, I can't wait to read more!
    October 24th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • shortygirl

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    I like this...poor Jasey
    October 14th, 2011 at 02:51am
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