Decayed Orbit - Comments

Definitely a smooth, refreshing read. The topic, however, was just not something I was especially interested in. Otherwise, I think your tone could be described as a sort of happy medium. Not too bland, not too ornate -- just right.

@ TrashBoat

Thanks so much

This piece is incredibly well written. You have a strong narrative voice which complements the eloquent structures of your descriptions, and allows you to bring your characters to life. You nail the complicated nature of young relationships, thereby bringing to the piece a sense of authenticity.

It is truly a quality piece of writing.

I like this. First of all, because it is beautifully written and your words always seem to fit like puzzle pieces. I liked Kandi, how she thought, how she expressed her way of thinking, and the way that you described the events was also magnificent. You kept Logan in character, right into the last line, and it mafe me laugh! Because that was so Logan! And I liked the description of the kiss, the words you used and her feelings. This was a good piece of writing, VERY good. I enjoyed it great and I'm glad I finally clicked on comment swap :)

This was just so beautiful. I loved just...everything. How Kandi is far from perfect. How she's loved Logan forever and never even realised. How she had to go through so much shit just to see what was right there the whole time.

It was just so sweet and poignant. I adored it.

First off, I'd love to say that the title of this just stood out. I simply had to click it.
The layout is great, too. Plain. Simple. Elegant. (:

This is written beautifully. I love your descriptive writing, and the way you managed to tell a fantastic story with very little dialogue. That is something hard to do, and I feel you succeeded in that with a breeze.

Thank you for producing a great piece of work. I really enjoyed reading it. (: