this is really cute and i like the story line so far separated at birth and all that, not quite finished yet. but i feel like everything happened really fast, but maybe thats just me. But good story :)
June 13th, 2012 at 02:13am
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Oh my gob this was a cute story!November 28th, 2011 at 02:00am
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YES! Haha, I love how that panned out, and boo hoo jocks just get lost already. xD
And wow, shocker there, a drama and twist for the sequel, oh damn! I hope this won't make me hate Zeke!! x/October 1st, 2011 at 07:29pm -
Ooooh yes sequel needs to happen ASAPSeptember 29th, 2011 at 05:19am
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*Raine
my bad :pSeptember 27th, 2011 at 05:38pm -
AWW YEAH! In your face biatch!! LMAO.
Wish I was there, I could have thrown in an insult or two xD
Damn this people! Stupid, stupid people! grrr..
But to be honest I hope Rained didn't ran off and he sort of made a show out of it, make out with Hale in front of everyone so they can shove it to their faces that they couldn't do them any harm.
Well, a girl can dream, can't she? Haha :pSeptember 27th, 2011 at 05:38pm -
OH MY CHEESE.that was epicSeptember 27th, 2011 at 03:44am
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wooooo!!! this is getting intenseSeptember 23rd, 2011 at 02:20pm
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No, no, no. I was talking about Hillary the bitch! I could never hate Raine he's like the baby here emotionally. :)
I love this update, and I can't wait what Hale is planning in his pretty little head, go get that attention whore! xDSeptember 23rd, 2011 at 08:34am -
Haha, I knew there was a reason I love Zeke, and it's a good thing they found it before Raine had a chance to leave, it'd be too much heart break, damn that bitch for putting so much shit.September 19th, 2011 at 02:36pm
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i really like this story keep up the good workSeptember 18th, 2011 at 10:57pm
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Hi, I commented on my own story like a boss! But mostly because I had 19 comments and not 20. And it really bugged me...
I really do hope you guys love this, I've never written a story like this before, about normal people. I always have to have some sort of magical twist or whatever.
And all of your comments are really helping to keep me motivated, thanks so much <3September 17th, 2011 at 03:38pm -
God that bitch,I seriously couldn't find it in me to have good emotions towards her sorry, but she's a curse to humanity, haha and yes please, flay her, thanks xD
Good thing the twins stood up, specially Hale, if Raine wasn't there he couldn't have gotten out of that 'friendship'.
Someone hates Raine? WHAT?!September 17th, 2011 at 01:15am -
LMAO!!! im still loving this !!!September 16th, 2011 at 11:29pm
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super super love this!!!!! plz plz PLZ keep updating!!!! and if u dont... my rainbow bunnies will come and steal all ur left shoes!!!! UPDATE!!!!! plz and unicorns :DSeptember 15th, 2011 at 04:14am
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hahahaha why thank you. wish my readers did that :(September 14th, 2011 at 02:09pm
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I hate Raine...gosh, I really do. Blek. Oh, and uh, nice story. X)
I hate you, Raine.September 13th, 2011 at 08:49am -
Oh hell no, Hillary that bitch, FLAY her I say! >:|
I'm so glad Hale's so fast to turn the table and God, how awesome can they get! I love how Raine showed that homophobe too, damn this is great stuff right here. And I'm really liking Zeke. Update more! :DSeptember 13th, 2011 at 03:47am -
:) oh yes good stuffSeptember 12th, 2011 at 03:41pm
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Haha, gee thanks! :)
Never have I ever thought Raine would be the one who'd top but then he's the more emotional one so that works greatly. And gosh, power of love ei? It just conquers all. How a simple three worded phrase got him back out of his miserable state. Awesome update as always!September 12th, 2011 at 03:55am
