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  • notrelevant

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    Aww :) They're so cute!
    September 11th, 2011 at 01:40am
  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

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    Aww.. poor baby. :(
    I just found this and read the bunch, damn. I couldn't believe have wonderful their mother is. If she wasn't young she wouldn't have want to have her kid adopted but it was a good thing because I don't think they'd feel the same if they actually grew up together.

    I love this and how loving Hale is and how cute Raine is, amazing names by the way, haha xD

    *subs*
    September 10th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • Burgerat20

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    I love it!!!! It is awesome and I love you for writing it
    September 10th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • Fall To Pieces

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    OMG! I'm so surprised that she was totally fine with it!

    It's soooooo cute (: I loved it you're a great writer :D
    September 5th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • bernardbananahammock

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    Wow brilliant story, its a great plot! Buuuuuutttt....only thing I would say is chill with the yelling and shizz I'm getting a virtual headache :') Other than that I love it! :D
    September 5th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • notrelevant

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    I didn't even realize the name thing :o
    Well, I'm glad everything's working out for them...
    ...for now. :)
    September 5th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • notrelevant

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    Wow, their mom should be pissed. o.o
    September 5th, 2011 at 12:41am
  • Burgerat20

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    OMFG!!! i love this
    September 4th, 2011 at 09:08pm
  • PURPLEluvsMCR

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    You sibmitted this story what, a week ago? And I just got the names (: Haha, oh wel! (:
    September 3rd, 2011 at 05:48am
  • EGraceW

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    Omg Raine and Hale? i get it, haha and i LOVE this story!! plz plz plz keep updating!!!!
    September 1st, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • notrelevant

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    Guess who loves this story? I do!
    Quite a lot, actually.
    And I wish that you'd update it right now :3 Please?
    :D
    September 1st, 2011 at 06:40pm