Aww.. poor baby. :( I just found this and read the bunch, damn. I couldn't believe have wonderful their mother is. If she wasn't young she wouldn't have want to have her kid adopted but it was a good thing because I don't think they'd feel the same if they actually grew up together.
I love this and how loving Hale is and how cute Raine is, amazing names by the way, haha xD
Wow brilliant story, its a great plot! Buuuuuutttt....only thing I would say is chill with the yelling and shizz I'm getting a virtual headache :') Other than that I love it! :D