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  • fogbound.

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    This was very descriptive and good plot. Loved it.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 04:37pm
  • eminemswagger

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    so, i like this :D
    September 5th, 2011 at 10:26am
  • MysteryGirl2109

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    v thanks for the comment and noted, but will be lessed use and keep reading chapter 8 coming in maybe twenty minutes :)
    August 28th, 2011 at 12:54am
  • Yella

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    I like this so far! I've only read the first chapter but I can tell I'm going to like it. One thing: you use the word "but" a lot try changing it up so it won't sound too repetitive.
    August 28th, 2011 at 12:44am
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