The Hope is Fading - Comments

This was very descriptive and good plot. Loved it.

so, i like this :D

v thanks for the comment and noted, but will be lessed use and keep reading chapter 8 coming in maybe twenty minutes :)

I like this so far! I've only read the first chapter but I can tell I'm going to like it. One thing: you use the word "but" a lot try changing it up so it won't sound too repetitive.