Rein - Comments

keep writing please! i love it!

Adrian better not try anything!!! I love this so much. (: I can't wait to see what happens.

I love this story! I cant wait to find out what the secret is!

I've decided what it is. I don't like Rein. I love the story, and I like Stephen but I can't stand Rein O.O
She is such a weak character! Argh! It's coming along lovely :)

i really like this story.

Hes so innocent. I cant wait for her to spend time w. him and his sister. Aiden better not be a d!ck.

Love this (:

Yes, what about what she thinks? I lvoe this so very much and I cant wait for more.

I.Absolutely.Adore.This.Story.

Update soon!!!

Oh my... you now have yourself a new reader. Can't wait to see more. c:

oooh :D UPDATE!

What happened!!!! Please update soon.

Wow, Im really enjoying how quickly this plot line is picking up. The details are beginning a lot more organized and the dialogue fits better in my opinion. There seems to be a bit of wishy washiness behind Rein's character, as in her personality kind of slides all over the place, but everybody is starting to really come into focus. I can't wait for the next update :)

She deserves him to spoil her, she doesnt let herself relax. I want to hear about her past though...Update?

This is really good. Like really, really, really good. I like how Rein doesnt want to rely on her parents. I dont likes Adrian. I understand her wanting to support herself, I used to really stick to being like that but I ended up crashing. Stephen is so sweet. I hope the hard to get ends soon and they just are together. I wonder the secret motive of hatred her brother has...Please update soon, really soon.

Firstly, chapter one got reposted. So chapter one and two are the same thing. Secondly, though a little rough around the edges, and not just yet unique enough to not be a tad average, it's actually a very good story. I suggested taking some time to sit and back and decide what are important details and what are not. Use your words to paint pictures, and not just to color in the lines.
Forgive me if I've been rude at all :)
I plan on subscribing and seeing just where you can take this story.