Seven - Comments

oh god i feel like when her friends and family find out about her escapades she's gonna be in soooooo much shit

HAHAHAHAHA VIOLET
man this Jared guy is so awkward it'd be endearing if maybe he wasn't such a shitty kisser, but maybe he's inexperienced idk man but this is such a hilarious story

OH MY GOD
FUCKING VIOLET
I'M LAUGHING SO HARD
SHE SNEEZED IN HIS FACE AND HE SHOVED HER IN THE POOL
EXCUSE ME WHILE I DRY MY EYES

I'm starting to get attached to this story... ALREADY! Only 4 chapters in and I want more! I seriously doubt I've read a story similar to this one. I love how it's different! I love that Violet has had one of the best awkward moments ever.: :cool:

Tbh, I kinda wish I had read this before I went on vacation! ;-) Lol! I really really like the quote you use a couple times in the story also! Please update soon!

omg. you are the queen of terribly wonderful awkward moments.

YIKES
it's not moving too slow (((:

i am getting so excited because things are starting to ramp up and girl's gonna turn her game on–if she has any, but if she doesn't, she'll get it fast!

oh goodness, i feel as though Noah's the sibling who gets more attention and care whereas Violet's more overlooked and seen as a means to satisfy Noah when the parents don't want to do something, if that even makes any sense?

however, i am SO excited for the updates to come!

WELCOME BACK MARIANNAAA ((((:
i am so pumped for what you have in store for this (AND YOU WIN IN AUGUST?!) oh god Violet's mom sickens me with her bubble blowing and fun-sucking self already

SO GLAD YOU CAME BACK TO THIS! I kind of remember the original and I just wanted to say that this rewrite seems so much better.

I kind of really want you to start this.

WHEN DOES THIS BITCH START? I WANT IT NOW.

The summary has already got me smiling. I don't know why but I love stories where the girls go from one personality to the next, simply to fit in or for some other means. I'm definitely interested in continuing reading so be sure to let me know when oyu post the first chapter. :] The layout is cute and sets the atmosphere just right.

The layout is gorgeous. I love the way the title is reflected, I don't think I've evr seen that in a banner so it's really unique. I liked the color, as well, it made everything seem very sweet.
When I was reading the summer, all I could think was I need to be on a beach, reading this. Because its about a vacation, and I need a really long one, bad. I also thought it was amazing - I'm all for the teenage rebel movement. I was like, you go girl! But it's probably bad she keeps kissing random guys. Ooh, is she maybe going to find her true love in Mexico?

I love Mexico. Just saying. Heritage country FTW! I say good luck with this story, and keep me posted. :)

The layout is gorgeous, like fo' real. Sooooo pretty, and the banner works perfectly with it. I want to marry it. Is that legal?
Also, I'm subscribing because the summary has given me high hopes for this story. I love how you've worded it, I especially love the "Whoa." at the end.
Well done, Well done.

The layout is so nice, it makes me want summer too come back, because it just looks like that's when it would be. I feel like the story is also going to be very nice :)

AWESOME layout!! The sun is just seems a bit, whoa there! But I love the borders on the picture.

The summary seems awfully cool. I like how she introduces herself to us, it makes me want to get to know her better, be her friend.

This seems really cool, you should start it soon. :)

MARIANNA START THIS STORY ALREADY OK BECAUSE YOU ARE FABULOUS AND THIS SOUNDS HILARIOUS ALREADY SO JUST START IT OK BYE

Please start this, it sounds too interesting! c;
the layout is absolutely GORGEOUS.

Wow! This takes place in Mexico? Cool! I'm subscribing (:

Oh, this is very intriguing. I find the Whoa. at the end a bit unnecessary, but everything else in the summary is lovely. :3 I wonder how this will play out? It reminds me a lot of the Mexico news that I saw on TV about vacationers and how they had to be careful due to all the shootings and violence. x')

And the layout! It truly is pretty. The colors go really well together and I love how the title is a mirror sort of thing in the banner. The only thing I would change, if this were me, are the thick borders on the side of the picture. I don't know, those sort of things never really appealed to me. I would have them going all the way down the body, or not have them at all. But they're part of the banner, huh? It still looks really nice and clean, anyway. And I still really like it. :D