Orgasm. - Comments

This story is so amazing, sexual and hot, without being solely sexual. There's a very thick love story in a drabble. And I also think you've gotten me started on a new pairing.
Keep writing!

I only learnt about Rory/Doctor today and your story has made me fall in love with it!
The story is so detailed and in a way beautiful, please keep writing, it would be a waste of talent if you stopped.
Again this story is wonderful, thank you! :D x

This concept made me giggle a little at first, because, well, I’m immature. But reading through this a couple times, you still baffle me with your attention to detail, which, ironically, was kind of the point of this one.

You use so many original similes in this. I’m really jealous of your writing. I favorited you as an author.

It almost seems weird in a way at first that the Doctor is so fascinated by the details, but then I chalked it up to his being male (because doesn’t sex fascinate all men?), but then I kind of thought, “Isn’t that also love?” Taking in all the details and loving them like that? This was a really cool story to me from that take. I’m kind of jealous of Rory, too; I want a guy who’s that absorbed in me! The way you say the Doc can never catch all the details at once, but they’re what makes it worth it really gives the impression that he has every intention of staying right there with Rory until he can see them all, which, incidentally, you say is impossible :) That’s the sweetest thing ever.

I really loved this. Once again, you’ve written a great one.

OH MY GOD. is all I can say. Mostly because you just killed me! That was too amazing for words.

I strongly suspect you are trying to kill me. I now have a very vivid mental image of Rory when he comes and that is just so unfair because it is ridiculously gorgeously hnnng-worthily beautiful. I mean, seriously. TRYING. TO KILL ME.

That aside, this was as wonderful as usual. :D I really, really love the detail in this; it's quite a short piece but there's just so much to it, like the nail-digging and the hair in his eyes and the perfect parabola. I will never be able to solve a problem to do with projectile motion again without dying of laughter and it is so awesome. Also, the last line made me giggle so much. NEVER STOP, DOCTOR. NEVER.

You too, Kaitlyn - never ever stop writing these two. I think that might actually kill me, honestly.

OMG, I can't believe there aren't comments already. I love this. I do believe you've gotten me addicted to this pairing, especially the way you write them. :D
from the way Rory's stomach sucks in, pushing his ribs outward to the way his nails dig into the nearest surface (whether that be the Doctor's skin or the sheets) to the way his mouth opens wide, lips pulling back in an action that shouldn't be sexy but somehow is-Oh my goodness, this just this. :D Now I'm fascinated by his orgasms. xD Something about the image of his nails digging into the Doctor's skin just does it for me. I think you've officially converted me.
But while he absorbs all this, the Doctor realizes he's missing the rest;- I love this. I love the idea that in trying to take in every single detail from the biggest to the tiniest, he actually misses so many things. That's such a great (and true) concept, and also it's so very true to The Doctor. It's just so like him.
He completely misses out on how his neck arches, creating the perfect parabola and he only barely registers Rory's hair dipping into his eyes, gleaming with sweat.- I love love love this description. It's so vivid, and again so fitting to the characters. I mean his neck creates a parabola! You actually worked that term into a one-shot about orgasms. That's brilliant! It's brilliant in any work, but in a Who fic it's just so very perfect.
Every time, the Doctor tries to catch every little thing at once and every time, he misses something; just that one thing that, to most other people, would be totally insignificant.-Again, I love this concept. I love that he wants to, even feels like maybe he has to, know Rory inside and out. Like he has to know everything he can possibly know.

Kudos! :D