Would You Stay Right Here When I Tell You That Some One Out There Loves You - Comments

First of all, I don't think it is a good choice to have a gray colored font with a black colored background. It makes it a tad bit harder to read and see. I have to tilt my computer screen to be able to. This story is not one that I would personally read as it is not my tastes. That being said, you do have a very well written story,just going by the first chapter. There is a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there but a beta reader could fix that easily.

PLEASE write more

*AMAZINK

More!! Its AMAKINK!!

I love Gee. XD
"Bye lover." XD
Brilliant.

WRITE MORE. Xb

i LOVEEE it! i want moreee! :)

i LOVEEE it! i want moreee! :)

so, i decided to check out your other stories- and it's good that i did! :D
i like it so far...the only thing i didn't really like was that i felt it a bit cliche for her to bump into one of the boys on the first day...but other than that, it's cool :)
though i feel bad for gee :(

Awww Poor Gee :(

Awh you're welcome. :) I'm still absolutely in love with this story and, like always, this was amazing. I think it's cute that their relationship is picking up so fast. I can't wait for more.

Why isn't anyone reading this? I love it so far. The whole idea of a bunch of misfits with tragic backgrounds being friends is just so . . . I don't know. It makes me smile. This story is cute. Frank is my favorite. As always. I adore Gerard. But I feel bad for him about his dad. :( Where's his mom?

The only thing I could complain about is the multiple spelling mistakes and no break between paragraphs. That would make this easier to read.

Other than that, you're good. I'm looking forward to this story. I'm subscribed. :)