Mindless - Comments

Oh man, I was going to say the conversation was cute but i guess somebody already said it. :/
It was really nice twist at the end with the hallucination. Like!

Like The Motivated Idiot said the conversation seemed real. I like figureing out what would happen next nad wondering what it was about. I imagined the main character in a white room and I saw the story as it played in my head. I liked how you did the layout. That was something new. It made me believe the main chartater was really real.

This is so cute. I love the conversation, it seems so real, like what real people would actually say. It really surprised me about the figment of the imagination thing. I really wanted them to live happily together. D:
I love it. Good job writing it. :)