(I know I'm forever and a day late on this, but you can go read my note on the contest wall for more clarification) Just as on your other entry in this contest, I really felt like I needed to comment on this. And I actually almost made the same mistake that I made in that comment. I didn't realize at first that we switched things around, so I was all "hmm, she's got things goofed again. He was supposed to move to America" but then I thought "oh wait...i think we talked about that" and had to go back and check my messages -.- So yeah, idiot of the day goes to me right now. But onward to the story commenting: I absolutely loved how cocky Dean was at first and how sure of himself he was that Hanson would say yes. That was probably my favorite part about the whole thing. I really did like the whole thing, speaking of that. It was a really cool idea and you pulled it off really well. Awesome job on this, for sure!
Awww.. I was seriously cursing at first, fucking American. Haha. But then, it was so cute when he couldn't deny him at the end, he's cocky advances were paying off. xD
Just as on your other entry in this contest, I really felt like I needed to comment on this.
And I actually almost made the same mistake that I made in that comment. I didn't realize at first that we switched things around, so I was all "hmm, she's got things goofed again. He was supposed to move to America" but then I thought "oh wait...i think we talked about that" and had to go back and check my messages -.-
So yeah, idiot of the day goes to me right now.
But onward to the story commenting:
I absolutely loved how cocky Dean was at first and how sure of himself he was that Hanson would say yes. That was probably my favorite part about the whole thing.
I really did like the whole thing, speaking of that.
It was a really cool idea and you pulled it off really well.
Awesome job on this, for sure!