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  • K.Monroe

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    Whoa major update! A bomb. A kiss. And Matt didn't actually blow his stack!! So great! Can't wait until the next update...
    August 25th, 2012 at 10:11am
  • soapy

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    wow brian saved her life! & told her he loves her. wow i hope there isnt a fist fight between him and matt, hate to see them fight over a girl! well now they know who is after her they can kick their butts! its going to be so sad when bree has the talk with brian ): he is going to be upset. i dont think those boys would want to share her either haha! great update! :D
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:52am
  • shortygirl

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    Matt was very understanding about the kiss...can't wait for more
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:40am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Wow someone try to bomb her and Brian..but luckily they're are okay. Tho Matt wasn't very happy to find that Brian and Bree kiss, but not only that but she kissed back. At least she was honest with matt and told him that she does feel something for Brian but she's totally inlove with matt.
    Now they know that the Russian mob is after them and hopefully Matt can take care on them soon before they hurt Bree again or even worse the kids.
    Great update :)
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:25am
  • bloodravyn

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    i'm so torn, Brian is so wonderful for her, but then again, so is Matt
    August 24th, 2012 at 07:45am
  • killa thot.

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    Dammit! Why can't she just forgive him already? He obviously deserves it. He loves her enough to get out of his drug-dealing business and she's just telling him that she can't trust him anymore. I understand that, sure, it's womanly intuition, but come on. And I have a bad feeling about Brian. I have a pull in my gut that says he's planning something............But whatever. I'm sure I'll find out in time....right? *Dramatic stare...* I love this story because the grammar is awesome, the layout kicks ass, and the plot makes me wanna cry out in frustration, but in a good way, of course.
    August 6th, 2012 at 11:32pm
  • Rath

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    I love this story.
    It's sooo good.
    I hope that she forgives him soon.
    Please update again soon?!?!?!?!?!
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:52am
  • xXMrsShadowsXx

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    What Brian said... was fucking hot. But Im team Matt lol Matt should say stuff like that c;
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • lyss89

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    ahh I just read all 16 chapters today and I love it!!!!! can't wait for the next update!
    August 4th, 2012 at 06:06pm
  • pjrox

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    I love him! Matt.. but love the triangle.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • Jenniix

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    good, good, good! i really enjoy! don't let us readers down!! keep updating!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 12:06pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    If she doesn't get back with Matt soon, Brian is gonna make a move!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:32am
  • Crosbyhawk

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    Loved the Matt part! Aww what a big softie! Man, I hope she doesn't start falling for Brian even more now! I want her and Matt to have the happy ever after! Hahahha. Great update!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :) aww that cute moment where Matt playing princess with ruby is too cute
    August 2nd, 2012 at 07:33pm
  • HGatesAces

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    Have you read 50 Shades of Grey??? Brian seemed Christian-y for a brief moment...got me excited
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    As! Matt is such a cutie! I love how he is this big softie around Bree and the kids. Way to cute. Brian is startig to scare me though.
    <3 Michele
    August 2nd, 2012 at 01:42pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it XD
    Update soon
    Aww Matt is so nice with the kids and Bree LOL XP
    I feel bad for Brian, Matt and Bree... Brian likes her, Matt loves her, Bree loves Matt but is starting to like Brian... Someones going to get hurt XC
    I can't wait to find out what happens
    AHHH i need to know before i go INSANE o_O
    August 2nd, 2012 at 09:27am
  • shortygirl

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    Aww Matt is so cute playing make believe with ruby..I feel bad for Bree she's stuck in the middle
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:03am
  • soapy

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    oh my god, matt is SO adorable playing make-believe with ruby! can he get anymore perfect?! he loves those kids as if they were his own. holy shit. why does he have to be in bad business?! & awh brian! so cute with the kids as well. he really likes bree a lot O_o but matt will never give up! i hope they find out the people who ruined her apartment so they can work on things! LOVE THIS STORY :D
    August 2nd, 2012 at 07:53am
  • Tati.the.Strange

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    Awwww!!!!! Matt's so cute!!!!!!! And who wants a Ryan gosling when you can have a matt!!! (and maybe even a Brian thrown in ;D) love this!!!

    ~T. Strange ~
    July 28th, 2012 at 09:12am