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  • Rath

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    I love this story.
    Oooooo! Sexy time! Lol :D
    Please post the next chapter soon?! I can't wait to see what happens next.
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:52am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Freaking love this story so much.
    July 20th, 2012 at 09:17am
  • soapy

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    this was so fucking hot. like one of the best. oh my god. i can't even. just it was really hot, really really hot. i hope there are more sex scenes between them. so sad they still love each other but all this coming between them ):
    wow who knew drug lords would be so good with children!?
    matt really is perfect in this, expect for this job though. oh man ): lies are not good matt.
    i can't wait to read more of this, like its so good and realistic. perfectly done :D
    July 20th, 2012 at 08:40am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great update!
    July 20th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :)
    I know that Matt wants to get back with her, but I think it's wasn't the right time to ask back while they're having sex.
    I really hope they are able to work things out eventually for now Matt needs to make sure Bree and the kids are safe.
    July 19th, 2012 at 03:21pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :)
    I know that Matt wants to get back with her, but I think it's wasn't the right time to ask back while they're having sex.
    I really hope they are able to work things out eventually for now Matt needs to make sure Bree and the kids are safe.
    July 19th, 2012 at 03:21pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I loved it X^D
    I hope they get back together
    Yea it was Not the right time bring that up during sex LOL...
    Update soon please
    I can't wait to find out what happens X^P
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:35am
  • shortygirl

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    Bringing that up during sex wasn't the best time..i hope they get back together though
    July 19th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • becbec214

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    So. Fucking. Great.
    July 19th, 2012 at 05:58am
  • Yeah?

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    Argh! i'm ready for them to be back together! I love when he's protective...
    July 19th, 2012 at 05:52am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh boy. Why do I feel that the little escapade probably gave Matt false hope. This was a wonderful update!!! I love how genuine they are, when they are near each other.
    <3 Michele
    July 19th, 2012 at 04:21am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Loved. Loved. Loved. IIIITTTTT
    More soon please!!!
    July 19th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • MemoriesMakeMe

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    Don't know why, but I seriously want her with Brian! Ugh. Matt's adorable too though...
    July 19th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • pjrox

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    So much happening! Such a suprise. Can't wait for this to all unfold.
    July 12th, 2012 at 01:53pm
  • Rath

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    I love the update.
    I hope that she eventually forgives Matt.
    Please update soon?!?!?!?!?!
    :D
    July 12th, 2012 at 06:40am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Gah!!! you updated!!! yay!!:D cant wait for more!!!
    July 11th, 2012 at 09:47am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great update! She needs Matt now more than ever! She needs to get over her stubborness and just accept his help! <3
    July 11th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • soapy

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    oh my gosh! she is marked for death?! matt has to protect her at all costs, oh dear oh dear. will this bring them closer now that she is staying with him? the kids will love it. but i suppose he brought this upon them but by accident ): so sad. cant wait for the next chapter, so update soon :D
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:40am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    :(
    Poor Bree. I know Matt'll make it right.
    More soon please!
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I can't wait to find out what happens next
    Update soon
    I loved it
    July 11th, 2012 at 03:36am