Art of Subconscious Illusion - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    Well at least Brian didn't explode on her....this probably isn't the last of this sunject
    December 21st, 2011 at 05:56am
  • Shadow14

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    Wow, that's a lot of pressure she's under right now. I hope Matt doesn't be a dick and tell anyone, change his story, or try to do anything with her again. I also hope that everything turns out good for her and Brian, I hope she doesn't lose him. That would suck for the both of them.
    December 14th, 2011 at 02:25pm
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    She under alot of pressure...i hope she doesn't loose Brian
    December 14th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • shortygirl

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    Oh boy...when Matt finds out Brian asked her not to get with anyone he's goona be pissed as will brian
    November 29th, 2011 at 11:32pm
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    Nice chapter. I like it. I hope her dad doesn't find it
    November 23rd, 2011 at 12:51pm
  • shortygirl

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    A sex toy? Well i just hope her dad doesn't find it
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:41am
  • shortygirl

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    Zacky TMI!!! It was ffunny though.... THings are getting very heated
    November 16th, 2011 at 06:53pm
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    I think she needs to tell them about what her father did. They're her friends, they deserve to know. I love how her and Brian found out their feelings for each other.
    November 16th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    She needs to tell them that her father raped her. It bothers her. Her dad doesn't even care about her. I like how her and Brian like each other =D
    November 16th, 2011 at 07:57am
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    I've seen this a few times, but never read it until now. I wish that I read it sooner. This is a really good story!! I feel bad for Savannah and what she has to go through! I can't believe her father raped her and she isn't doing anything about it!!!
    November 10th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    her father is fucked up. she should tell the police
    November 9th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • shortygirl

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    Her dad raped her...thats sick....i get that father is all thats left but come on thats sick....The guys aren't gonna be to happy when they find out or that the fact that she lied
    November 9th, 2011 at 04:42am
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    Zacky TMI!!!! Matt is tough he can make it
    October 26th, 2011 at 05:50am
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    I hope her dad stays in jail or gets some fucking help
    October 19th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    I agree with shortygirl. Just let Matt beat him up. He deserves it since he beats her.
    October 12th, 2011 at 07:30am
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    I'd honestly just let Matt beat the shit out of him
    October 12th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    wow her dad is mean. I feel sorry for her
    October 4th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • shortygirl

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    Oh no i can't even imagine what he'll do now
    October 3rd, 2011 at 07:43pm
  • shortygirl

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    Hmmm her father seemed like the over protective type at first
    September 23rd, 2011 at 06:23am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    Update soon. I like your story. =)
    September 16th, 2011 at 07:15am