Oh, Lover - Comments

Finally getting around to giving you your candy. o.o

I'd just like to say the title of these made me start humming O, death.

This was so perfect and just so cute. I think it could really be continued if you wanted it to. The banner matches the story perfectly. Though this isn't really a drabble I still read it because it was beautiful. The detail detail was amazing and just asdadfas. I love this to death.

Well, I had ALL your stories to choose from! I picked this one because I loved the layout, and my cousin is called Holly :) so I kind of felt the need to.

Anyway, I really like this story even if it was 200 or so word long. I'd love to read so much more if I could *hint hint*. Your writing style is so descriptive and I definitely felt something for the way you explained Frank. The picture in the layout connected SO well to the story, or you connected the story really well to the picture. I don't know, but it worked!

I think you should write a sequel to this, I'd definitely subscribe and read it throughout. Generally this made me smile, the long country roads, meadows! Heaven :)
Well done xox

You hit the banner right on the nose. Perfect for reinforcing the theme and tone. This was beautifully written as well. I could totally feel her excitement when she could finally see the place that she always felt as home.

The only detail I caught that was weird was the part about the stars. It should either be 'finally be shinning again' or fianally shine again'.

I seriously loved this. So pretty.

I loved this!
You had me engrossed!!!
:D
No grammar or spelling mistakes,which is always a good thing :D
Beautifully written
Keep up the amazing work!!

I really love this. I really do. <3
I think your descriptions are amazing. They really bring imagery and make me picture a lot of things in the story. The image in the layout supported that, and I could picture her kicking the rock and smiling--it was all very...visual.
The grammar and spelling was flawless. I didn't see any mistakes! One thing I saw hinted in the story was that, in that particular scene, she acted very much like a child. She seemed happy and content, she kicked rocks and felt like she was in a meadow, and she was smiling as she was walking. It really reminded me of a happy little girl. (:

This was a very interesting piece, and it was written very beautifully!

I love the way you describe things, I love the story concept and how this was so beautifully written, I love the title and I hope you win the contest :)

Clouds were in the sky and if you looked closely you could see the faint stars in the sky which seemed impatient to finally shinning again.
Usually people avoid the indirect you. :)

I love how she gave up a luxurious life for her lover. This story is so sweet. It was also written beautifully. :)