First of all , this was awesome. I really like the style and theme running throughout the story. Your character was well described and readers seemed to know her in a space of a couple of lines.
"Instead of storming up the stairs to her room, like what is usually expected of a teenager, she walked into the garden. "
I really liked that line especially cos it kind of singled her out , yanno? Made her different - not the typical teenager =D
And also , the belief strung through your words was really cool.
First of all , this was awesome. I really like the style and theme running throughout the story. Your character was well described and readers seemed to know her in a space of a couple of lines.
"Instead of storming up the stairs to her room, like what is usually expected of a teenager, she walked into the garden. "
I really liked that line especially cos it kind of singled her out , yanno? Made her different - not the typical teenager =D
And also , the belief strung through your words was really cool.
Well done , I really enjoyed it:)